Wait... she had Mush's kid? Why didn't she take him w/ her... Sorry momentary confusion... OR IN TIMES THAT HE CRIED, IN BRIDGES HE BURNED< OR THE WAY THAT SHE DIED! KEEP IT UP!

Your hobbity Friend...

i just read all 5 chapters... it's really really good! but coin is a little depressed... i feel bad for her! and chapt. 5 is good, not sucky. lol

I like the story and how it ties into Rent. Nice job. Update soon!

hey this is really good!! keep the updates coming!!
carryin da bannah,
Annie

*runs around, cries a bit, screams once* Oh my, oh my! Poor Coin! What're they going to do?

is this a oneshot?
carryin da bannah,
Annie

NO DAY BUT TODAY! I was starting to worry... ::looks around, sees plans to kidnap Mush, and hides them behind her back:: ... You saw NOTHING! Anyway... i really enjoy this story! Keep up the good work!

Your Hobbity Friend...

Ah! *in excitement pretty much has a full body spasm* Oh no, oh no, oh no! What's going to happen with Mush and Coin?!?! What is Mr. Carrigy going to do!!?!?! I hope he doesn't kill Mush. That would actually be quite terrible.
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I can't wait, I can't wait. Keep going! *grabs Coin by the scruff of her neck* KEEP IT UP! FOR THE LOVE OF...PETE!
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Cheers,
Buttons

loved it... I take it you're a Rent fan as well??
Please write more!

Aw! *cries is a slobbery, weepy way* I love you Coin!
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This was so good! Coin's life is just down the crapper, isn't it? I like the ending! It's so sweet. You rock.
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You rock. (again)
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Cheers,
Buttons

AHAHAHAHAH! IN TRUTH THAT SHE LEARNED OR THE TIMES THAT HE CRIED IN BRIDGES HE BURNED OR THE WAY THAT SHE DIED. I LOVE! THAT SONG! AND MUSH! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL KIDNAP HIM AND HE WILL JOIN THE GROUP OF KIDNAPPED NEWSIES! I kidnap newsies from the authors who don't update... i currently have Spot, Racetrack, Skittery, and Blink. I stoll Jack just because i wanted him... i have trained him well...

Your Hobbity Friend...

OH! I like. What happens next? The bit about the mother dying and the baby being born was a nice touch. Update soon.
Seize the Day!

this is really good... cant wait to read more

This is interesting. I think I like it. ^_^

YES! IT OPENED! (it wouldn't for chapter one)
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No, goddamnit, I don't want a daily horoscope. If I did, I would read the paper!
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Sorry, popups.
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That was good! I'm excited to see where this goes. If it does...it better... *shakes fist*
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I liked how you worked in the part about the mother between lines, it was dramatic. I think I'm in love. With your story. *does a dance* yay!
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Cheers,
Buttons