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Reviews for: Bitter
jafarjasmineforever2005
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
That's a good job keep it up.
Katie Ann
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
I really liked this take on their relationship. Your characterizations are very clean and canon, and your dialogue is intriguing. You manage to make their discussion tell the story, while instilling interest in the reader. Well done. ;)
TsukiNoBara
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
That was nice, really, to see them just...talking. It's hard to find good stories like that.
kitsunelover
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
Very well-written. Their dialogue is a joy to read, the way they test each other's limits yet manage to respect them. I like this mellowed Mozenrath very much. :)
persian85033
2005-10-17 . chapter 1
I always wondered what those two would react if they had a diplomatic meeting, in the future, or something. Great story.
Calluna
2004-12-04 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm impressed! I've wondered if wearing the gauntlet had some kind of effect on Aladdin, but this is the first fic I've seen having to do with that. I hope to see more stories from you in the future! ;)
Lady Macbeth
2004-10-28 . chapter 1
Nice. :) Interesting take on the two of them. I still giggle at the goatee - I had never imagined dear Mozey with facial hair until I saw your stuff. There's a few technical problems that your beta will probably nab. As far as the story goes, it looks sound. :)
Paul P.S. Sullivan
2004-10-27 . chapter 1
Wow. Very well written and I like the conversation between Aladdin and Mozenrath.
The Original Marisa
2004-10-27 . chapter 1
Well, you've got some great development in there, and good pacing as well. Not too slow, not too fast. Nothing's introduced too quickly... and though I was a bit confused at first, it was because I didn't notice all the detail. I do like this story, and I wouldn't mind seeing Aladdin's adventures with the gauntlet chronicled for everyone to read :D
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