That was written well. They're so cute together!

satoshi is good on that, he tricked dark bad

this is good

Che. Go SatoDai WOOT!

kawai desu yo! i wish it was longer though...

That was very powerful, and very sad. ;_;
Especially with Daisuke thinking that everyone is just using him, maybe even Satoshi! And that last sentence was particularly moving...
...though that could be just me...^_^()
Great story, you should write some more.

impressive
just like your writing stile

shadows

lol! KAWAII! that was horribly cute. Except the pale blonde hair part. It sounded more like Krad then Satoshi. oh well, still a good story.

*squeals* You wrote Satoshi/Daisuke! *glomps* wonderful as usual, and I love the way you've ended it-simplistic and yet very meaningful at the same time. ^^ *adds to favourites*

err...its too yaoi for me to stop blushing! my god..uhmm...err...\
Ah! its beautiful..continue it will ya?

This is great! I loved it! ^_^