Can I say, Wow? It's like Seifer is reaching through the screen and speaking directly to me, though he WISHES he could talk so economically, not a single word included that needn't be. This is definitely Seifer's sometimes false bravo and sarcastic, butter edge, and this is probably going to become my headcanon. You've definitely got into Seifer's head, his pride and just how nasty he can be. I don't particularly sympathise with him. I still don't, but I feel like I understand him better, cruel side and all.

This is probably my favourite line: "And I don't care."

There is something depressing and cyclic about it, that the monster Seifer is confronted with every day is himself, but without the cliche'd execution style that idea us usually given.

I read this fic a LONG time ago and I hated it because it was so great and convincing. This fic truly made me believe that seifer COULD be such a monster. Yes. this fic is fantastic. And I now hate Seifer with ever fiber of my being! POOR FUJIN! I JUST WANNA PUNCH SEIFER IN THE FACE UNTIL HIS EYESBALLS FALL OUT!

One of the few well-written first-person fanfics I've seen out there. I love your take on Fuu, and her personality. I love the background you wrote to her eye. I love the relationshp between Seifer and her that you painted.

It's just all together a great fic.

oh man. that was just plain SAD. really made me shiver.

I don't really have a comment... This was well-written, and I liked it.

Wait, that was a comment... .;;

I've read "Fly" just a while ago and here Seifer is again with another one of his victims. Maybe Quistis and Fujin should get together and find a way to get back at him lol.

By the way since Seifer keeps going on about how much he loves Rinoa maybe you should write a fic about it. Lets just see what the big fuss is about for his precious Rinoa.

Great ficcy, Chickie.

very Seifer. *sniff* beautifuly written. *sniff* that was really nice man...you made me cry.

I have to admit that I'm in love with your fics; they're so unlike other ones because they show the darkness of the human soul. So be honored with knowing you're the only person with two fics on my favorites list!

*eyes grow large* You... *whimper* Seifer... you... *begins crying spastically*

Wow, that was just amazing. Brilliant character study on Seifer.

Good one

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That was... amazing. Truly. Utterly spectacular.

Wow. This was a great fanfic on your part. I was very impressed. Great job.

@*#$%. That was one of the best fics I've ever read. I'm serouis. That was bloody fantastic.