I thought the "she" was Ginny, and then i got confused, because one of the people next to Anton was Ginny, and I was even more confused, but the last sentence cleared it up: it was parvati!!

fabulously well-written, I must say.

Dark and twisted! I loved not knowing which Gryff it was until the end!

I have a mission to review all your BEAUTiful stories...hehe ok that's over but still I am truely shocked at this story My Dear oh wounderful truely wonderful *sighs* Different from your other remarkable stories yet a piece of you is throw into there.
I knew that Pavarti was a bad egg if I may say so. Really thinking she could just throw THE Draco Malfoy out like that without getting away with it. HA! In your nightmares I bet. *smirks* But I love how Blaise fixes this small problem, also fixing Draco's heart but I don't think it was much affect by her...
Now I'm not certain yet I think that Virginia is with Anton unless she's also with Pansy hmm I will agree with my little vision and make them a lovely couple in this story *smiles pleasingly*. Ah poor Padama she's lost her soul to them...hmm sounds like fun in a sick twisted way of course, doing much better then her sister though.
Thank You My Dear for this lovely sick twisted story *grins*

this story killed me. thank for writing it.

I love that you one-shots are so long, not just some 700 word chappie. Yay Draco wins again, Yay some more for Virgina and Blaise too.
mouse

ps. please right more, and all of that begging junk...

You are a very good writer, however I thought it made your story seem much less powerful when Ginny and Anton, and Padma and Pansy started getting kind of sexual. I also thought it detracted from your story when Parvati called Blaise a ** and a ** in her mind. It made it seem kind of middle school melodramatic.

Heh. I read this once, thinking it was Ginny the whole time, and then being very confused at the end. I re-read it, and caught a lot of things that implied it couldn't be Ginny - like mentioning of things that happened in their first year, and saying "their" 5th year rather than his/her... very clever, very clever. Excellent story. I'm glad Parvati didn't get him. Hah.

beautiful

I didn't read this... but I just wanted to find somewhere to request that you not take what I'd said in your other story wrong... I really did like the story... but ending kind of broke my heart. :( I hope you do continue that though. Please?

Excellent... Really. As surely was your intention, I was convinced Ginny was the narrator, and I even thought you had written it. You can imagine how confused I was when Ginny really appeared.
After that, I still continued reading to see who this girl was, and who the "riding **" was.
Bloody excellent.

Beautiful! However, I think some of the names, Ginny's and Parvati's, got mixed up..

"...And you will never forget, will you, Parvati?" (When Blaise is talking to Ginny)

"What are you doing here, truly?" Ginny(?) demanded in a soft, yet commanding, voice, and she thought about not answering her out of spite, but then thought better of that when Anton snarled and flashed sharp fangs. What the **?

Just to let you know, though, if you want to correct them.

Anyway, again: amazing story, even if it is just a one-shot. I love how you write about Draco, Blaise, and Ginny in all your stories.

wow this story was pretty confusing. i thought this was a D/G fic at first but then the sofa bit and i was like, WHAT??

and then "brown hair" i thought - Hermione, and i was gonna stop reading because i hate D/Hr, and then it turns out to be parvati, lol.

brillant story as usual =)

(even if its not DG..)

And I quote, ‘I hope you all like it, and…” You bloody well believe that I liked it. No, I LOVED it.

Priceless. That ** deserved what she got. How DARE she do that to poor Draco!

Ooh, Anton made an appearance! *sigh* You know I loved THAT... And isn't Anton just so yummy when he's angry? *drools* And Anton and Virginia! H-O-T!

The way you expressed pure agony was just so... poetic. I don't know how but you captured it so well. Such a feeling so perplexing and intense that you'd rather die than bear another second of it. Gawd, you're amazing!

And you kept Parvati's identity hidden all throughout. I had no idea and the surprise only added to the impact of the whole story!

Even though I never read anything but D/G (well, save for D/G/B now that I unearthed the phenomenal, “Unexpected”), I read this. Because anything written by you HAS to be worth reading, right? Damn right. It was absolutely fantastic! There's just no other way to describe it.

And once again, your ending line was perfection in itself. You always manage to hold this appropriate finality to the ending of a story that hardly anyone else has. You’re an absolute goddess, in my eyes.

O this is so good. Poor Parviti, u should finish this since u finished Unexpected. You of very fe wauthors actually updates, adn has really original stories that are detailed adn are a pleasure to soak in. hehe and also i see some similar things between the two stories. poor ginny though shes not even with Draco and Blaise. ahh. Umm so i cant think of any constructive critism, just to keep on going!