|Reviews for A Secret Within|
| lydiathetigeropean 10/4/12 . chapter 15
update! update! update!
| CandyBabex 1/12/12 . chapter 15
Great story line ,i hope for the best that there will be more chapters lol .
| Drawerfan 12/23/11 . chapter 15
Can't wait till the next chapter & one more thing I read all the chapters its just when I find something new I dont just dont review when I read everyone single chapter I read all the chapters & then review somethimes, but anyways cant wait till the next update YAY! :D
P.S I also ready the 1 story about knowing Dona :D
| Diana Fay 5/23/11 . chapter 15
wow i can't wait till you update YAY
| dreamer 6/7/09 . chapter 13
i loved the first story, and i love this one even more! it would be suspenseful if Dona went into labor while captured. )
| Larissa 9/20/07 . chapter 13
Why'd you stop? Post more! Please. Take care and God bless.
| BrandyFan 8/29/07 . chapter 13
What's gonna happen next? Is Donna and the baby ok? Will Raph save her? Please Update!
| ArtieKnight 8/29/07 . chapter 13
This rocks! Keeping going or i'm gonna cry* hehehe
| Anonyomous 27 8/29/07 . chapter 13
I just read this and I think... IT ROCKS! I hope you'll finish this.
| Donny's Girl 1/1/06 . chapter 13
WOW! We took a ginormous break off of this didn't we? I'm so sorry about that:( I feel so bad lol its just... i had no e-mail then i had writers block and blah blah blah lol great job babe i'll have the rest of the next chapter to you soon!
| Fantacy 11/4/05 . chapter 13
Oh, I’m very worried about what has happened to Dona and I’m concerned about the little baby. What is Toby going to do with Raphael? Good thing that Raphael has his brothers. I loved when Raphael yelled as if he was talking to Leo, when Thomas touched him. Please update soon. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
| Mewfem 10/21/05 . chapter 13
Shell this story is good. I love it a lot.
| Fantacy 9/30/05 . chapter 12
I just love the fact how they met each other again, it was so romantic! The idea that Raph is going to meet Dona’s parents is fantastic. In addition, your conversations bits are great and I laughed when Raphael met Dona’s father. Good job to both of you!
| Mewfem 8/30/05 . chapter 12
I love the story. It fun to see Raph having fun.
| Dona Tello625 7/21/05 . chapter 12
well even tho i didn't get any reviews 4 this chappie I'll give my 1! I thougth that Donny's Girl did an excelent job with the ending! U go girl!