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| cryingshadows 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseyou know, being a goth myself, I can see where that is coming from. I like this poem, slightly depressing, another reason I like it. |
| Kitsume 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was great. I'm going to go read the follow up! |
| Sumarra 2004-11-04 ch 1, | abuseIt says black alot. But it's nice I like it. |
| Sakura Sango 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abuseSaka- O.O Kurama- *pokes Saka with a stick* Hey you ok? *knocks on head* Anyone in there? *sighs* Forget it! *walks away* Saka- *slowly wakes up* That was wonderful. OMG so wonderful and so beautiful. I loved it a lot. Write more like that soon... |
| Darkclaw 2004-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAll i can say is that was totally wicked awsome! |
| Ms.Defy Gravity11 2004-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy honest opinion...is that...I LOVE IT...IT IS EXCELLENT, WONDEFRFUL, AND INSPIRING...KEEP WRITING...love it! |
| ScufflenTussle 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseBlack... ah yes, symbolic of Hiei... Black... Nicely done, i applaud you. Black... lol ^_^ |
| ShatteredSoul56 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was very dark...I LUVED IT GREAT JOB!^^ |
| Green Tea Leaf 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abusehm... Its pretty good, actually, yeah, Hiei's a dark person.. *nods* yep yep! |
| A Life of Rules is No Fun 2004-10-28 ch 1, | abusedark and deep. so lonely is this man that he cannot see the day that lights his world. but does he not see the love that is given to him? and can he not express his love for them in his private world? why does he not care about the lives around him enough to let them know? this i do not know, and probably never know. your poem is wonderfully dark. if hiei could read this, i bet he would disagree with you secretly within his tainted heart. |