I really, REALLY, like this story and I want to read the rest of it. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE finish it!

Please write more! This story is really good!

nice kinda random chapter there, cant wait till u get back to the rehearsals tho!

It sounds like they had a very fun weekend. Seeing Swan Lake would be so awesome! Looking forward to more!

Yeahness! I heart this story!! It brings me backstage! Kepp going!

(Why didn't I review this sooner?...)

Anyway, great story! It's so nice to see the CATS world from the other point of view: the actors and actresses who play them. And I feel sorry for poor Sarah...it's so sad. When is the narrator gonna wake up and realize why she keeps going to the bathroom! Gosh. Anyway, real good, and keep it up!

I love this story!! But would somebody who's been dancing all day and clubbing all night really write that much in her journal? Wouldn't she be tired?

wicked

its still really good, but you might want to think of adding a new storyline to it. you already have the light ones such as "will they get together?" and "when will they find out that sarah has an eating disorder" but i really think you need something else, something a little deeper. Like, for example, Gill gets taken in and they get a replacement choreographer who no one likes and teaches them all horrible stuff, but they are forced to do it, and then when Gill gets back its a rush to get back on schedule or something like that. just something a little more desperate and immediate to kepp the story going!

but it is still really good, im hooked, but i thyink you have the possibilty and the ability to hook me more!

I'm taking a liking to Sarah. She seems like she's had a tough life. Is she purging again (I'm pretty sure she was the bulimic one)? I hope not. That's really sad.

This is still as awesome as it was before, if not more so. I'm really enjoying this.

This is really really great. It's exactly how I would imagine it. Please, keep going, it's beautiful.

wow, amazing, as ever! keep it up.

Wow This could really be a good story! I've only seen CATS once, in the dinky city of Winnipeg(well, dinky compared to New York) but it was still AMAZING! Keep going, this story could be awesome!

ops, didn't see this first page when i rteviewed, stup[id computer, and nice disclaimer!

This is really good! I liked it a lot. I've never read anything like this before and it's very interesting to actually read about a person's feelings. Of course I've dreamt about these feelings before, but it's nice to read them, if you know what I mean. Anyway, can't wait to read the next entry!