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| JACKIE 2004-12-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseGREAT STORY AND WHERE IS THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS. OK BYE ~JACKIE~ |
| kt 2004-11-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseooh! cool story! Please continue. Are Maria and Alex in this one? Carry on. You know you want to. |
| orly 2004-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abusecontinue but who the hell is it about? |
| Shannon 2004-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start!! One thing though. I don't know if anyone is familiar with the song "House of the Rising Sun" but it's a song about a bordello...just wanted to warn ya! |
| Jenn 2004-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am intreaged by this story!! in a good way I wan't to read more. ^_^ |
| Usagi-no-Kasai 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good so far for not having any really info yet? So what's it about other then two girls? Let me know. Later!* |
| LizEvans 2004-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abusewell written, i felt that it was happening to me, everything was so vibed that it was great. please write more soon, would love to see what else you have in stall. ps. loved your story |