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| quik-wit 2007-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseoh cool good one! |
| SG-Fan 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. |
| Kitroku 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseNice ending. |
| SaerinSedai 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is great. This is really great. I love how well you describe Narcissa--a much more well-rounded description than we get in the books, and we see a more human side of Lucius as well. And then there's the hint that this has happened before ("You know I always take care of this"), which is really chilling. Good job. :) |
| Melindotty 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseVERY creative! |
| Ethereal-Athan 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseAww thats so sad...thats awefull..not the story mind you but the characters actions, as you know I would never put down your work, I am still very envious of you talent. |
| hydra-star91 2004-11-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. That is interesting. You did that challenge fic very well. What a suprise twist. I never expected what happened. |
| Indigo Spirit 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseIn all honesty I do not like Narcissa and I like reading Fan Fictions where Lucius is written in this kind of position. Mostly because it's a little bit over don. I partly don't like Narcissa because she isn't really that important in the series. People have this ideal that she is really important to Draco but none of us really know this for sure. However, I do like this story. I just thought it was really well written and that you got Naricssa's character nicely written ( even though Rowling gives us very little information about her. ) I thought it was just so horrible how Lucius betrayed her. That's one of the worst ways to hurt some one. I felt like he had no right to do that kind of a spell on her and it was just so sad how it ended. Very nicely don I like this little piece of yours. |
| stars-n-moons91 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is so good! but so sad...I feel sory for her! But what about Draco, where's he? Well, now that I think about it, maybe he's at school...eh. Whatever. Very good! I"M YOUR BIGGEST FAN! (Pardon me while I go and build you a shrine...) |
| Dixiehnsnluver 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseVery Chilling... But a very well written piece. |
| dawn1 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea, rather sad, but definitely a cool fic... |