Hell!!
Why there is no followind!?
What I will become!?
rha... :'(

I hesitated to immediately read this text because of its length...I had to initiate direct!!

huhu very scary... love it!!^^

freaky part ^^'

Poor nel, as you say!! :3

Amazing work, love it!!

*steals the Crimson Scourge and pokes the author with it* Continue this brilliant fic or I'll carve you into a hideous maggot!

Haha, peace :D 'tis like reading a great novel. Once I started chapter 1, i never stopped till chapter 20! i really liked how much thought you put into this to give more depth to Albel and Nel's characters. plus you make them say really interesting lines. I do hope someday you would return to writing this story and give it an awesome conclusion :D For the meantime I think I'll re-read it! :)

I rarely encourage fanfiction writers to continue, but after reading this I have to urge you to write on to a conclusion, though it looks as though you may be on permanent hiatus. This story certainly has fantastic character development, so rare in fanfiction. Thank you for staying in character and giving depth to both main Albel and Nel. My only qualm is your abrupt changes in POV, but I must admit it was interesting to know the thoughts of both characters at times. Maybe there could be a better way to transition between POVs - perhaps separate chapters?
To use a cliche, your story is truly a diamond in the rough. I'm going to accept it as Star Ocean canon.

Please update, this story is amazing!!

love the story :) great plot, and great job keeping them in character. your grammar is good, and there are only a few spelling or punctuation mistakes. kudos to you! i know its been a while since you last updated, but i have had some star ocean writers update or respond after ive reviewed. i hope you are one of them, but i really hope that your life has stopped being a roller coaster of doom. :( in any case, its going on my favorites list :) tyvm for writing this story

when r u gonna update?...i hope its soon

Awesome story! I hope that you will continue this story, I really love it and you make Albel and Nel seem so in character. Great job!

Wow, I just powered through reading this whole story (or what there is of it so far) in a single sitting, and I'm impressed! There's an original plot, great characterization, and wonderful descriptions so real I can practically see it all right in front of me. Beyond a few spelling and grammar errors, I found little to irk me, and I've kept reading to this point only to be left at a cliffhanger! I sincerely hope this gets updated eventually, because I'm really wondering what you've got planned!

ive just gotten into this pairing
and this is an incredible story
i love all aspects
except how stubborn albel is.
please update soon!

I think I lost hope for the continuation of this fanfic when I saw the last time you updated it.

Oh well. Even though it'd fulfill at least ONE of my dreams for this fanfic to continue, I can't say that I regret stumbling upon this in the first place. Then I wouldn't've found a decent AlbelxNel that's not a oneshot.

I'd love for you to continue, but even if you don't, that's alright, since the first twenty chapters were so amazing, the imagery, the characters...just everything. The way you describe their feelings...all of it just leaves me stunned.

You've. Got. To. Continue.