oh no please don`t cut this. please continue.

Whoa. Fantastic characterization and the end was totally hot. Your prose style is clean, concise, yet very intuitive and gripping at the same time -- it draws you in.

Also, did I mention the end was totally hot? (Hee)

huhu...that's cute!

Uh YUMMY!

The way you wrie is fantastic, the way you describe everything. Please, you've to continue this series!!

Please continue? I love this series. :)

omg that was so cute and sweet and adorable...did i spell that right? i love it with a passion more more but ahlas you made that the end. it was still really good! keep it up!! ^_~LOVE Heynick

I love this whole arc, I hope you write more like it!

"The boy didn't know the meaning of the word 'discreet'. Literally. He wasn't sure Naruto could even spell it." lol
It's so cute how Iruka cares about Naruto... That's the main reason I love him, I think. XD
This pairing weirds me out sometimes, but I still like it.

Wow...that was good...very good.

I love it, keep going!!

~Pheonix

i loved all of these

Really like these.

I hope the next one comes soon! You should do these from Kakashi's point of view too!

Ek! Your just going to leave it like that! That's almost no fair! Actualy, it's NOT fair!

Very hot... ;)
baibai>yukie