 sarahyyy 2006-12-06 . chapter 4It's quite okay, I guess. Not the best I've read, but not the worst. Good luck on the next chapie! @_@ |
 vicki 2006-08-18 . chapter 4 no offence but this is kinda ** |
 Dominique 2006-07-12 . chapter 1 Scratch that last review... wrong story. Ops... I stll think it's bad though. |
 Dominique 2006-07-12 . chapter 4 I think this story is awful. It makes no sense whatsoever and I don't think Hermione acts like that at all. Also, in the chapter "Breaking Down Doors" why can Hermione and Draco sit at opposite tables? That spell couldn't have worn off already because they still had hate in them. You also were to quick. You didn't give the story any time to develop and threw in a bunch of one-liners from both Draco and Hermione. You should rewrite the whole story. |
 hpdreamz 2005-08-03 . chapter 4 really good...keep going |
 rani singala 2005-07-18 . chapter 4Cute story, hurry up and update! |
 rani singala 2005-07-18 . chapter 3Love the conversations inside her head! |
 I luv this! 2005-01-28 . chapter 4 Oh my goodness I'm so happy you finally updated! I love this story! Please keep on going, this is one of the few Draco/Hermione's I've read that isn't cliche. Please Update soon or I will die! |
 Smiles28 2005-01-25 . chapter 4U updated! yay! well done! keep writing.
have fun at skool next week! lol ttyl Smiles28 (nicole) |
 ThelovelyladyLily 2005-01-24 . chapter 4 LMAO! That was so funny, especially the part where she hits him with a book and punches him. lol. Pass me another piece of paper, Granger.” Malfoy said groggily, obviously he still hadn’t fully woken up yet. I had to break down his door and levitate him out of the door into the common room! And he was STILL asleep, so I had absolutely no choice but to throw a bucket of ice cold water over head.
That was funny! And so was this part:A question burns through my head: How can Malfoy annoy me so much? I mean, He’s not even doing anything annoying at the moment!‘Ouch, my hand hurts!’ lol. I liked this part too:
“Ok, Malfoy. Good job, you can run right off to your bimbo cronies now." Well, I actually like the whole fic, but those were the funniest parts in my opinion. Please don't quit! |
 Love Of blood 2005-01-09 . chapter 3Great, out of this world and fantastic of a story. Update soon. |
 I luv this! 2004-12-03 . chapter 3 Ok I am going to be in beta reader mode for this review so be prepared! You may think I'm crazy but I found the authors note funny!
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters associated with Harry Potter, if you haven’t heard of them before, they’re mine. That was funny. Also there was a little typo -To catch my break- I'm being very critical about this, but this story has a lot of potential and I'm sure it will be great! I do hope you update soon! |
 I luv this! 2004-12-03 . chapter 2 This story is really shaping up, it is very detailed but may be moving too slow for the readers and you may loose some reviewers. I better move on to the next chapter. |
 I luv this! 2004-12-03 . chapter 1 Hi, I would just like to say that this story is really good and deserves more reviews like many of the good but silent fics around. Maybe you should put some capitals into the summary, it's just that there are no capital letters and it may reflect badly on the story, most people decide what they want to read from the summary and if it has everything done well and is interesting you will get more reviews. I am going to look at the next chapters, I am interested as to where this will go. I love this story! (As if you couldnt tell from the name!) |
 sassafras029 2004-11-16 . chapter 3 ohh... I LUVED THE ENDING! yay! so now, i give kudos to you, and smiles to everyone! oh, and rainbows!! can't forget bout those! i have a feeling i said that before...hm...oh well. my head hurts from thinkin too hard about that, so i'm gonna stop. yeah. anywho- nice job! pat yourself on the back for me cuz i can't. then again, i could reack out a virtual hand and pat your virtual back...hmm... that would be quite interesting, wouldn't it? well, i think so. and if you don't well... poop on you! teehee. i'm jk. well, SIT YOUR BUTT DOWN AND POST ASAP! DO IT! NOW! err... sorry bout that. online spaz attack. so yeah. but i meant what i said and i can't say no more! well, actually, i could, but, that would be kinda repetitive. actually, it would be COMPLETELY repetitive. so yeah. anywho, I STILL LUVS THE STORY! yeah, i don't know why i keep usin caps lock, but hey. it works. so yeah. i CoUlD tYpE LiKe ThIs BuT i ThInKs It WoUlD TaKe WaY tOo LoNg. so yeah. well, it probably would get your attention. yeah, an entire review spelled out like that. quite an interesting affair that would be. actually, it really wouldn't be an affair since its not really a problem, you know? well, anywho, please excuse any typos here, cuz to tell the truth i'm like speed typin here and the last review i did (it was a different story by the way, so don' look back at the other one, even if it did probably have a lot of misspelled words. so yeah.) was filled with typos. i think i typed an s instead of a d like 10 times. so, kinda gettin off topic here (been doin that a lot lately... oh well) but i'll wrap this up. so kudos to you again! HUZZAH!
-Stephanie XD |
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