yeah sure but tell what is it first if its just that i get to read your work you know help you with it then yeah im up for it

Your story rocks! Especially the last part of it when Grissom "attacks" Sara... beautifully written!

Great fic!
If you need a beta, e-mail me at phoenix38133@!
Lindsay

totally awesome story, funny and more, i can beta for you if you want.

That was a totally AWESOME story there :) I didn't know the song and d/l it, and i have to say, it perfectly fits the story...
Yep, i found another great ff writer :)

Loved your story - I think you went just far enough for this story, but it's begging for a sequel!

Wow, I loved this fic so much, especially the ending. It was a fun story, everyone was in character, it flowed along nicely and was an all round well written piece. I would love to read a sequal and see what happens next.

This fic is virtually a masterclass in the art of pacing a story. I really ought to be taking notes. One of your skills is your ability to take we, your readers, to exactly where you want to us to be. The sexual tension here is very effective. I also like how you've selected appropriate karaoke songs for each character to perform.

That was a better than i hoped for! how bout a sequal, i'd love to see Sara and Gris get threw shift without anyone noticing!

Awesome Man! That was really good! Hope you write more stories, can't wait!

That was a great halloween story!

Great writing as always. Everything was perfect and in character. It was funny and entertaining. I loved Grissom's costume and the ending:)

Oh and I'd love to be your beta though I don't think I can right now, since my pc is acting up on me and I need to get it fixed. Don't know how long that will take but then again I still have the one at work. Anyway, my email is in my profile, so you can contact me if you want. In the meantime, there's this great forum I belong to(from Play with Fire website)on: ?msg=704
and it has a thread just for people asking for Betas. All of the members are really nice and I'm sure someone would be willing to help you.

Keep up the good work:)