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Yizuki
2008-04-11
ch 5,
abuse...Wow. That's...deep...I LOVE IT! ^^
Sunrise Phoenix
2007-12-28
ch 5,
abuseReally good, I like it. But what's wrong with Yugi?
sliders245
2007-09-11
ch 5,
abuseplease update
lady Alexas
2007-08-28
ch 5,
abuseupdate please
llivla
2007-03-25
ch 5,
abuseoh! this story is so... i can't even say the words! and the way you have it with varying lengths is clever, many writers have too many words to describe a scene and it flies off, pointless and ineffective. you find strength in the short and sweet, and this story -is- IC and so, addictingly sweet. ;) hope to see more... *adds to alert*
beetelgirl
2007-01-16
ch 5,
abusegreat story update soon



how is atem being selfish he's gonna take hime out
becasue yugi want to go out
Darkling221
2007-01-15
ch 5,
abuseUPDATE UPDATE plz its soo cute!
cosmic tomato
2006-12-21
ch 5, anon.
abuseA beautiful story and well written. More please...and soon.
SilverWing147
2006-11-22
ch 5,
abusewhy on earth has this story only got 44 (45) reviews?!?!?!?!?! It's freakin' awesome! and so sweetly sad and aww. This latest chapter, is just such a cliffhanger and so charmingly sad (talk about you juxtaposition and oxymorons) really beautiful. A couple of typos and mistakes. Seto said:

“You’re wedding coming up.

yeah, but just one or two little things like that, but overall very cool. I can't wait to see an update on this story.
tati1
2006-11-15
ch 5,
abuseThis fic is quite lovely.
What does Yuugi have?
tinkletimekelly
2006-10-26
ch 5,
abuseWow! Keep going.So what's gonna happen next?
Carmen-Nemrac
2006-10-26
ch 5,
abusewhoa, that was really good, heehhe anzus so funny XD, nah, anyway, hehehe i hope you update again soon!! its great! one of the fics i look forward to the most! seeya!!
yamiyugifanadic
2006-10-25
ch 5,
abuseGod so sad...;.; *cries* I don't want Yugi to die when he goes out, and damnit, why can't Atemu say no!? I mean, I know his father is a bastard and wouldn't allow it but...he also seems to not think how much it will affect Yugi.

Or maybe he has...but stil! D: Let Yugi live, or at least let them spend one happy, SUPER HAPPY day togther...then I will at least be content ^-^ If they don't even get a happy day...then feel thy wrath! xD

LOVE it update soon :D
Kari-Sama (Not logged in)
2006-10-25
ch 5, anon.
abuseWah! So sad!
I loved it, though.
Atemu Yugi Lover34
2006-10-21
ch 5,
abuseAH! What's going to happen?? Will Yugi survive...(obviously he'd have to survive...but all the same) Will Anzu get her head our of her butt confess she loves someone else...Infact had sex out of wedlock (okay maybe not as far as that...but you get the jist) and then poof! Yami be pronounced free from being married and can love Yugi unconditionally! YAY! lol...wow...anyways...update soon plz.
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