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Reviews for: One Night
Maia's Pen
2005-07-20 . chapter 1
Wa! That was so lovely and FUNNY I almost burst! I REALLY enjoyed it! How did I not see this one before?

You totally NAIlED the personalities of the cast!
Haha! The costumes were so silly *giggles* My imagination had some fun.

& Hiei was in it! Yippie! *huggles Hiei*

Super work, Maia
Johanna Gen
2004-10-31 . chapter 1
"Two thumbs way up!" "*!" This was quite a splendid fanfic. Little to improve upon here... Um... Safe and happy halloween to you too. I must be off. Farewell!
shadow dragon
2004-10-30 . chapter 1
I always enjoy stories about malicious mischief. I feel sorry for Shuichi, though, having to miss out on all the fun with Karasu, Kuronue and Hiei.
The part where karasu was talking to the pumpkin was as in character as a humor story with him can be.
ScufflenTussle
2004-10-30 . chapter 1
i really like the way you have written this and the theme is so appropriate (Halloween! yeh!). The grammar is accurate and your idea is very creative (Karasu and Kuronue not returning mysteriously like in most fics; you gave the information behind it). It is just a nice story in the spirit of Halloween, good job. Reminds me a lot of my own, lol, yet it is centered around O-Bon week in Japan. Keep up the good work ^_~
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