Aw!
Great job!
~AnimeFreak~

Once again, very splendid! This one had stanzas! ^.^ Anyway...um, line 3 in stanza 4 I do believe needs to be returned between 'maybe' and 'them'. That would make the stanzas an even number. ^.^

~Haven's Girl

really good poem!
um... yeah, keep up the good work!

~Chibi-Kikyou