love it! no offense but there are grammatical errors...alot of them...but i still love it! :) :) :) :) :):) :)

u didnt update for over a year plz hurry

Aw! That was one of the cutest things I've ever read! I loved it! Write more!

*stares blankly* yes grammar errors...but...that doesn't change the cuteness factor!...GO YOU!

good story update soon!

Grammar's fine, I don't really notice it. This is a good relationship building type story, though it doesn't really fit in to the real storyline where Naruto hardly seems to know Hinata, however please don't think I'm a criticizer, the writing style is good, please continue to update!

hey great story hope u keep it up

Great chapter

Your story is not bad until now, it's just that I don't feel that I'm in the story. Maybe that's because your chapters are very short, the story doesn't flow enough. What is in chapter 4? Hinata sneaks out and go eat a ramen bowl with Naruto, end of the chapter... Longer chapter will catch my attention and my interest more, feeling a lot more in the story. But that's your story so you do what you want! :-) It's only my opinion.

Chibis so cute, but when will the big bad Neji appear and ruin the happiness and innocence they share?

Cute story, please continue!

Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)

Good chapter

Work on having this proofread. the Grammar in the second chapter , ay least in some parts, hurt my head.

P.S: I hate the present when telling stories, but that's just me.

Nikikeya- OMG that's soo cute NaruHina i didn't really like the part about Hina's mother dying but other than that it's good Might need to spellcheck though .