|Reviews for Chibi Puppy love|
| Andrea 2/15/07 . chapter 4
love it! no offense but there are grammatical errors...alot of them...but i still love it! :) :) :) :) :):) :)
| lone-wolf 7/23/06 . chapter 4
u didnt update for over a year plz hurry
| naonaonao 4/15/06 . chapter 4
Aw! That was one of the cutest things I've ever read! I loved it! Write more!
| AnimeManga lubber 7/5/05 . chapter 4
*stares blankly* yes grammar errors...but...that doesn't change the cuteness factor!...GO YOU!
| VentMonster 11/14/04 . chapter 4
good story update soon!
| Acme Crazy Fool 11/12/04 . chapter 4
Grammar's fine, I don't really notice it. This is a good relationship building type story, though it doesn't really fit in to the real storyline where Naruto hardly seems to know Hinata, however please don't think I'm a criticizer, the writing style is good, please continue to update!
| Embrace nothing 11/12/04 . chapter 4
hey great story hope u keep it up
| Gopu 11/12/04 . chapter 4
| lukeluke 11/12/04 . chapter 4
Your story is not bad until now, it's just that I don't feel that I'm in the story. Maybe that's because your chapters are very short, the story doesn't flow enough. What is in chapter 4? Hinata sneaks out and go eat a ramen bowl with Naruto, end of the chapter... Longer chapter will catch my attention and my interest more, feeling a lot more in the story. But that's your story so you do what you want! :-) It's only my opinion.
| Dragon Man 180 11/12/04 . chapter 4
Chibis so cute, but when will the big bad Neji appear and ruin the happiness and innocence they share?
| HiNATAhimeCHAN 11/6/04 . chapter 3
Cute story, please continue!
| warprince2000 11/2/04 . chapter 3
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
| Gopu 11/1/04 . chapter 3
| Strockrow 11/1/04 . chapter 3
Work on having this proofread. the Grammar in the second chapter , ay least in some parts, hurt my head.
P.S: I hate the present when telling stories, but that's just me.
| Nikikeya 11/1/04 . chapter 2
Nikikeya- OMG that's soo cute NaruHina i didn't really like the part about Hina's mother dying but other than that it's good Might need to spellcheck though .