Aragorn! You need to review how to find a pulse.

Aragorn: *sheepish grin* um oops?

Legolas: Hey, Aragorn, I signed you up to take a CPR class at the YMCA.

Aragorn: huh?*Legolas rolls his eyes then grabs Aragorn and drags him to his much needed CPR class*

That's so cool, the story I would write if I were as clever as you. Which I'm not, so I'm glad you thought of it first.

Thank goodness Aragorn didn't decide to cremate him. That would have been a tricky one to come back from, lol. Great story =)

Wow, lol. That was so good! Awesome job! My favorite part was this:

"Aragorn swallowed visibly, 'Well, um, when I got back, my father sent a message to your father about your, er, demise.'

Legolas knocked his head somewhat gingerly against the nearest wall, 'Oh dear.'"

lol, that was so funny. "Oh dear."
Anyway, AWESOME job!

Someone on the Mellon Chronicles board recommended this and I'm so glad they did. I wasnt sure when I started it that it was my type of fic, but by the end, I was teary-eyed. Aragorn's reaction and Legolas' lecturing were really good. And remembering Thranduil was a nice touch, too! Poor Aragorn!!

Very good fic! I loved it!

However, although it was supposed to be angst, I found the whole thing strangely funny. But, I suppose I was just picturing the characters' reactions in the end. Or I've just been mixing too much Edgar Allan Poe and sugar.

but, it WAS angsty at parts.In the beginning, especially.

Great story. I found it over at Cassia's site this morning. Nice combination of drama, angst, and humor -- "Resigning himself to the fact that he would get no sleep this night, the prince trudged towards Rivendell." That was cute. And Aragorn's reaction? Priceless. Also, when Legolas tells him that he would die a thousand times for him; now that was poignant. Your ending was good, too -- the prospect of having to face Legolas' father was a good touch. Really well written story. If you ever re-post the only thing you may want to change is the use of "loose" for "lose." It's a common mistake, easily corrected. Now I'll check out your other stories.

Okay this is for the record.

I have told you before I love this story. I think it has to be my favorite so far.

I can't imagine what Legolas must have felt like finding himself buried alive. You wrote the pain and anquish so well.

Not to mention Aragorn thinking his best freind had passed over to the Halls of Mondos. I so loved the fainting part. lol

Excellent job my freind.

OH MY GOSH! Wow...I'm speechless...wow...

ok pretty good but i think i would have enjoyed it more if it had been drawn out in to chapters and mabe start in the fight. anyway it wasn't bad, this is just a tip. okaydoky!