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Kerowyn Van'Seph
2009-12-14 . chapter 15
Hey! I love your story. I found it very original, although that might be because I don't usually read this type of stories, although I do enjoy them (I just haven't been able to find many). Anyways, apart from the occasional (extremely rare) spelling/grammar mistake, this is one of the best stories I have read up til now. Kudos!

~ keroV
Delrusant
2009-12-07 . chapter 15
nice story rvrn if both harry and Voldemort are too overpowered.

The only "bad stuff" is the fact that they went into the effort of becoming animagi, and except for powering up and fetching dumbledore, no action scene used their ability, may be a chapter between 14 and 15 during the two years could have used them.
Hocapontas
2009-11-17 . chapter 15
This is starting to become a daily thing! The 5th one to be good enough to be a 3x ultimate favorite! Is there a sequel?! I hope so!! I'm going to look and see! If there isn't one I hope your planning on writing one!
danny beast
2009-11-14 . chapter 15
great i loved the chapter but there should be more ron and hermione
beldarath69
2009-11-02 . chapter 15
Just finished the story. EXCELLENT! Keep up the good work.
valondon
2009-10-11 . chapter 15
Excellent story! I have read up to chapter 14 before but for some reason, I've never been able to complete the whole story. Now that I've had the time to read your whole story, I couldn't be happier. While I'm sad to see the Janus project dead and you not posting anymore, I'll get by with this story. All I'm dissapointed about are all of the plot lines that you never finished, there are still many unanswered questions.
Hikaru Kosuzaku
2009-10-03 . chapter 15
Oh this was good. Very, very good. I like it a lot.
WeReWoLf SwEeThEaRt
2009-10-01 . chapter 15
Um I think you made a big mistake. Percy died in the beginning of the chapter, but at the end you mention Evan and Percy's relationship. You may want to change that.
WeReWoLf SwEeThEaRt
2009-10-01 . chapter 5
Why would Hermione immediately assume she was in Gryffindor and that Ginny would be there too? Or that they would be in the same house? Why aren't the others worried that they could be in seperate houses?
WeReWoLf SwEeThEaRt
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
Hiya, Im just reading through the chapter with the review bos open, commenting, because I forget when I finish the chapter. Xerxes? What kind of a name for an owl is that? Im gonna call him Zeus instead, everytime I read that name. Why does fanon love to call Hermione ''mione'. Its not much shorter than Hermione so whats the point? lol. There are quite a lot of mistakes and things have you considering getting a beta to help? I love the fact that Sirius look so much better after less time in Azkaban. Umm Sirius called Harry 'kid' that seems and awfully American thing to do and something I doubt Sirius would do. ANyways, loved this chapter please keep writing.
Adeptis
2009-09-16 . chapter 15
Good story.
Starscape91
2009-08-19 . chapter 15
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this story!
Xx Kiamii xX
2009-08-07 . chapter 15
That was classic.

"What about this one?"

I think ANYONE would faint after hearing that xD
AmbivalentAngyl
2009-08-02 . chapter 15
Your fic was perfect i loved it. It wasn't too long and its wasn't too short and you elaborated on the important things and neatly summed up what usually are boring long discussions about frivolous things. Great piece of writing!
Blackrose-you touch you die
2009-07-25 . chapter 15
Ha ha
Love the ending!!
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