Perfect!

hmm...you know I REALLY like this story...and seeing as it hasn't been updated since 2005 can you perhaps PM and tell me if it's going to be updated? I'd really like to see this continued. It's so different and well written. Piqued my interest.

Kei

I really like it, so I hope you'll get inspiration soon

Good luck

I really like it, so I hope you'll find inspiration soon

Good luck

hey. good luck.

Good fic. Please update soon!

Well, I gotta say that I was terribly bummed when I saw that this wasn't an update, but alas, I understand your situation at the same time. I used to write fics all the time and just haven't had the drive to do so in quite some time... leaving many pissed fans in my wake.

However, I do plan on completing my current fics and starting more, and I sincerely hope you plan on doing the same.

This fic is one of my favorites and is something I search for each time I hop onto this site. I know it may not be anytime soon, but I really do hope you pick this back up. I'll certainly be waiting.

Males mating makes no sense, yet i've heard male bison are attrcted to each other sometimes...Still a good chapter

update

I love your story and have been followin git for awhile, but haven't had time to write a review sorry. Hope you continue!

I don't flame people, you have the right to write whatever you want. I don't go any further than an opinion. I actually like the fic, that one part got to me that's all. I hate flamers with a passion. As long as someone is just putting input on how they feel is one thing, but when they start to flame... I don't agree with that. My policy is, if something bothers you, you can point it out, but if it gets to the point where you flame, then just stop reading.

Great story. Nice to see one that's actually well written. Update soon pretty please.

That's pretty sick. Especially Goku being attracted to Radditz and all...

Wow! Well, that completely explains Raddiz's earlier behavior... Ah! And the flashback with chichi was really beautiful - you write her extremely well! : D

Hey there. Its trunks and goten by the way. Well that was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it. Man poor Kakarot.. he's in heat and his brother punches him for it. But now i understand why Raditz was comfortable with it.. and how can you really blame him... that must have been really rough on him. Awesome work on the discriptions. I can't wait till to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and update soon...