Brilliant Story You should keep on going and make another

great! make more

Additional point: Some grammar mistakes here and there but overall well written. If you write more I'd be interested in doing beta work for you!

Wonderful story! Truly wonderful. It's pretty difficult to find good Fillmore Fanfiction out there but this takes the cake! You threw me for a loop so many times and the ending! Oh, the ending! That took me off guard with Micheal! You must write a sequel or at least more Fanfiction. I beg of you! :D

...I never saw that ending coming. Micheal! You work at the treasury, you hire all these kids just to rob it? It's genius man! Just plain genius!

are you planning to write a sequel?

man, you took FOREVER! XD but i guess this AHMAZIN final chapter makes up for that. i was like OMG FILLMORE GET HER! and then i was like OMG INGRID PUNCH HER IN THE FACE! but eh, she's arrested. that's good enough for me. :P great story! loved it!

...sequel? -

I have yo say this final chapter was worth it.

hey!

whoa...i did not expect Michael to be behind it...

awesome ending! - :)

Fillmore's an idiot... Sorry, just had to get it out XD nice story please update soon :3

hey!

seems like Ingrid finally caught on.

another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)

You've been missed. I love this story and this chapter was as good as the others. Can't wait for more.

Would you mind slowig the story down?

This is such a good story! Do you plan on ever updating it again?

this is great! Who's Joseph again? He's...Anza, right? Forgot! LOL! I really like where this is heading!