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| degrassijayandalex 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseok well even though this fan fiction is a one shot i loove it cause it has jay and alex has the couple and i cant help it but say this in every review that i write because i loove alex and jay and they are like my favorite couple ever.Anyway back to the fan fiction i really liked the begining of the fan fiction when jay is talking in like his head or whatever and he is like thinking and he says that he knew when something was bothering her cause she would just use someone as a punching bag but then he knew when something managed to get through her hardened heart and really bothered her she would just act like nothing was wrong.For some reason I really liked that part.Also the other part in your fan fiction that i really liked was at the very end of the fan fiction was when alex took all her anger out on the wall and then jay was like that might work.I kinda thought that part was really funny,i dont know why but i did lol.keep writing more jalex fan fictions cause this one was really good! |
| DaRkDrEaMeR23 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI love it chicka!! Nice little short! |
| ellieincarnate 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abusegood idea for a story...i believe i may have found someone who loves jalex as much as i do...tho i think u made alex a bit too heartless and jay a bit too soft...but hey good fic...jalex forever!1 |
| Blondi-Finny 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI luv this story!! Jay and Alex are one of my most favoritist ships! Great Job! ~*~Blondi~*~ |
| be11011 2004-10-31 ch 1, | abusehey i know you tried to make this a one shot but i like it so much you should continue writing it and is should be about jay and alex making ricks life hell and please continue to write this and pleasse write more jay/alex stories cause i love jay but i have whem people turn him gay |
| Staargirly 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseAnother great Jay/Alex fic. I'm trying to write one myself, but yours are much better. |
| GOThICsOCkMoNKeYs 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseneeds more Jalex but stil really really good |
| Misfit7x10 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI think I know why Jay in the episode said "That's it" when Emma tripped Rick and was going ti kick Rick's **. Rick's face expression looked as if he was going to hit her or something. He was mad and Jay noticed. Anyway, I like it. |
| rollinx3 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abusei love this! and ur others! |
| Maibe Josie 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI love your random shipper shorts... |