one-off one-off? I think you mean on-off don't you?

I like it. Is the spell thingy from Charmed by any chance? It sounded deadly familiar...

Nice job!
you really are a great writer I think you should keep doing the story ... because IT ROCKS!

Oh, good job James. I like the idea behind this story, and you've got a talent for description. I also found the length of this story to be perfect-- not too short, but not too long! Great. *Endless thumbs-up*

-A