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| AthenaWarGoddess 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abusekool.i luv poetry...mab i shood write sum 4 this...nywayz...ur a great writr and ever1 shood read my story!Last Six! |
| Nanna9891 2004-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Though it is rather short it is still a quite good 'poem'. But some things do rhyme, others don't... I think you could build up a story on that!! But first you have to update Future's Twins... =) Keep writing! Love, Spera'89 |
| no-one worth mentioning 2004-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseme likes this 1. |
| Alligator355 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseme like me like. you did a nice job with the poem. the only thing is that some parts ryme and others don't. it was fun to read though. GOOD JOB^_^ |