|Reviews for The Possession|
| SkeleTonQueeN06 2/23/13 . chapter 9
ok... you really need to update this story!
| offtherockers12 12/11/12 . chapter 9
luv story so far plzz update.
| luvu11 11/22/12 . chapter 3
NO NO NO NO NO! Only Sakura and Sasuke
| Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 9
please continue to update this is a very good story
| Nuria Sato 7/30/12 . chapter 9
You should totally update this,please don't get tired of writing this story! Its soo good you can't leave us reviewers hanging and yearning to read more! This is a very good plot, there's lots of detail and and situations in there that its a mindblowing story. I've read this quite a few times and everytime I do I wish there was more to read. If you are getting tired of this story/Naruto then finish it quickly and then you don't have to bother about it. Since your not tired of Sakura couples do it for the sake of that! Please Please finish this Sakura now knows why Sasuke is so possessive of her and she is in love with him-this will obviously make lots of SasuSaku moments that I would really want to read! If you are on hiatus then please come off soon and UPDATE this! Its always best to finish off a story once you've started it its stops reviewers from flaming at you! I'm really sorry if this review is annoying or pissing you off but I can't help it I really want to read more and see a finish story! Take your time in updating if you want but don't discontinue this-its too much of an awesome story to just abandon it! Hope that you UPDATE soon! :D
| BitterBreak 7/28/12 . chapter 1
Oh crap. As soon as I finished reading the first chapter, I think I just saw a vision that this fanfics gonna be really awesome. Hehe onto reading:3
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 9
| hama431 6/28/12 . chapter 9
are you going to continue this story
| Lealizbunny 6/28/12 . chapter 9
I love ur stories but r u gonna finish the story?
| crangelique 4/8/12 . chapter 9
First things first, your story, if ranked from 1-10(10 being the highest), is definitely a 7. Why? Well, I love the plot. It has depth and it's unique in its own right. I also like the characterization. I don't mind having a possessive Sasuke anyway. Sakura's mood swings and childish antics are cute. I just didn't like the part of her getting beaten by Ino since I like a strong Sakura (pretty much like in Shippuden).
What I don't like is obvious... Wrong spellings & grammar, anyone? Surely, you can do better than that. I expect anyone who's older than me to do better(Sorry but I think that you're really older than me). I would really appreciate it if you could, at least, go over with the chapters that you have already published and learn from your past mistakes & please don't ever repeat them. It takes a handful of indifference & attitude just to go on & ignore the mistakes.
I know that I go way beyond the scale of being annoying so please forgive me. I just want to give an honest review about your story. I love your story & I hope that you could improve it somehow.
| MidnightCherryBlossomCat 4/4/12 . chapter 8
plz updated soon and i cant wait to read the next chapter 10 and also love the story so far!
| Shubhs 1/28/12 . chapter 1
"The two bother princes who held the most beautiful faces"
I think you meant brother?
"She got her attitude, well as her hair color, from her mom."
as well as her**
"They were alike in so many ways that her father always pointed out when they get into a rant he could never tell them apart."
You can't get into a rant but you can say you started to rant.
"Can I go play before we start diner?"
I think you meant dinner.
"What are you going to make fun of my over size head too?"
This is just the first half of the first chapter and I wasn't even looking.
Please go through your story and proof read. It is very annoying when authors don't proof-read at least twice before posting up a chapter. You might have checked then but in your excitement, you might have missed them out. Please do look back and go over the story again. It is fraught with grammatical errors, typos and incorrect use of certain words.
Besides that, your plot definitely has potential. Just work on your understanding of the language. :)
| Rony 11/22/11 . chapter 9
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz ! don't sepret sasusaku and MAKE OTHER COUPLES FAST it's drivin' me craazzzy! and yes one thing I forgot to tell ya which is actually most most and most important that is UPDATE REALLY FAST BECUASE WAITING IS MY WORST ENEMY!
| PaLpABle-TrAnQUiLitY 8/30/11 . chapter 9
| andychan 8/29/11 . chapter 9
I've been a fan of your story (the possession) ever since the first chapter and if I may be allowed to put it in a metaphor, I am like sasuke in your story and sakura is your fan fic. I do not want to sound mean to budding authors but sasuke/sakura fan fics nowadays just aren't as good as they were before. Please update. you need to finish this story. I know what you mean when you said that you got bored of the naruto series. I did too. On my part, I got bored due to the series' lack of romance and sasuke's limited appearance. Hope inspiration for this fic comes to you. I shall review your stories for the rest of my life if you would *determined* Hope to hear from you soon. :D
your biggest fan,
p.s the first time I've read your fanfic (the possession) I think I was in 6th grade. Now, I'm in my 2nd year in college. Yes. I am that much infatuated with your fic. teehee.:"