 Plushie Heartless 2005-08-18 . chapter 1OMIGOODNESS! YOU EFFING ROCK!
XD This is not good! I'm in the library!! I'm suppressing the urge to laugh my head off, and it's *Not.* *Working.*
Drunken Duo's rambles ("A gummy rodam! Go, rodam! Fly hard for the future!"), Quatre conveying 'both of their emotions' and being confused by Heero's one-word answers, and Relena at the end...(dies of inability to express her joy of reading this fic)
Later days! |
 crsg 2005-02-11 . chapter 1lol, the drunken speech was written very well. |
 Zolac no Miko 2005-01-14 . chapter 1Hn. This was surprising. It's not quite what I expected. I'm not sure what I expected, but this was a little more serious, I think.
Except for the end, with Relena. That was hilarious!
And, wow, when you said shounen ai between the lines, you really *meant* between the lines! I mean, the feelings were there, but it was very subtle. Well done!
Sigh. Poor Duo. |
 KawaiiTenshi27 2004-10-31 . chapter 1kawaii!! i liked it lots! r u going to add more, or is that it? i think you should keep going, it could def. work as a longer story. well, ta! |
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