Not going to lie, but the ending was a bit disappointing to me. I guess I just wanted to see an outcome, but oh well. This is some dark story. It was dragged out a bit too much, but I couldn't stop reading it anyway. Good job!

Wow. I LOVE this. I've never read a story this twisted. I'm only half done with chapter one, but I felt the need to review so far. I love how this story was written. It's amazing. I'll review after I finish more of the story.

"the moral? morals are boring." lol!
that's fantastic, it really is...

You probably get this all the time, but I really have to repeat it. This story is absolutely brilliant. I love the different perspectives, I like the idea, I like the personalities, and I like the ending. This story has basically everything, it's perfect, and I don't think there's any way you could improve it.

That made my insides hurt. I can't bare to read anymore. It's extremely original, and very very well written. But.. Part of me just died.

I have read this story many many times.And this is my first review.I never realized you had so few.It makes me sad.
This story,is one of the best,that I have EVER read.Fanfiction OR fiction.Its pure,unadulterated GENIUS.
Its so dark,captivating,sick,twisted,and evil.At some times it can make you sick.But in a terribly appealing way,that draws you in.
How is it that everything you have written is this good?Its utterly amazing and Im surprised that more people havent reviewed singing your praises.I for one,happen to worship the keyboard you touch.Seriously.No need to sound fan-girl or anything,but your writing is truly amazing.
And the ending line,about morals,is just a perfect ending.How long must it have taken you to come up with something so utterly FITTING?Or perhaps it came to you in a stroke of inspiration.
Your portrayals of these characters is so in depth and developed that they feel like real people,or even real gods in the case of Fire,Ice,and Shadow.The way they became so cold and statuesque and dare I say it,Godly,in the last chapter is just so perfect for the situation and OH!The poor scrolls.I was wondering how you would fit in the flashbacks.
I am so glad for the EXISTENCE of Anton,because he is amazing.His personality and character are to die for,and I mean that with the utmost respect to the Royals,really I do.
If you ever stop writing though,I might just have to hunt you down and dish out a few of Fire's moves on you,eh?

im only on the third chapter and am absolutely enthralled.

this fire and ice IS different...nice work

darkly, disturbingly decadent. By the gods I love your writing.

i liked your story, but it was a very long read. Im not critizing it but u kinda over-wrote it. But it was still an excellent story.

ok i have to say that that was as equally amazing as unexpected... and i have to say that as much as i think that you are an extrodinary writer i think that you must be twisted to think of half of the tortures you had in this story...and that is something to say coming from me lolz harry and rons torturous deaths were amazingly twisted and were, in a sick sort of way, funny... it is obvious for me to say that i loved your story and hope you will continue writing.

sincerely,
Kaitlyn
aka
Crimson Butterfly

this story is so ** twisted and i loved it!! i really enjoyed the fact that someone finally gave into the dark. the good side allways wining was getting really boring and its so cliche i mean look at real life. dose the good really allways win?? no so why should we keep a blind eye? things in life arent allways good and in this twisted way the darkness wasnt all that bad.

WOW!
this is one of the best i have ever read! It's so diffrent, evil winning. Don't read that often do do you!!

This is bloody awesome. Love it! Very well written and all that.

It's over! HOW?! NO *cries in self pity for the end* but at least I can read it over and over and over again *manical laughter* hehe well...first off I love the story because it was written by My Majesty, also because I love the two chapter P.O.V but, My Dear Sirius and Anton only recieved one how very unpleasant. But still loves it all the same.
Yet come on I say those children are just like their parents *sighs* how perfect. That black pool they have...where can I get one please? If your selling them maybe you can give me a discount *nudge nudge wink wink*. Making me see everything throw flashbacks was a wonderful experience, but yet you kept the presant which was kind of you Dear. Oh Virginia is terribly evil throughout this whole story making her even more dark and yummy.
*palse for another extraordinairy story* Thank You My Beloved

Hey, this is exciting... i just started reading it! Good luck with this fic! WRITE!