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Chcoholic
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
love it!!
its soo...inspiring! cute, beautiful, AMAZING!
i love the chemistry between gus and his parents(es? lol)
he got 2 dads and 2 moms..but not the usual 2 parents...heheh..lol..

my favourite part is this:
“Jesus loves everybody!” Gus screamed at him. “Even stupid jerks like you! And if he can love stupid jerks like you he can for sure love my dads! At least they aren’t mean!”

i think i can use that nest time my friend say gay is wrong...
i mean, even gus, a 6(maybe?)year old boy can say that, im sure as heck can too...

r u goin to make a sequel?
Branwen777
2009-03-16 . chapter 1
This was so sweet! I love Gus/Justin stories. I always thought Justin would be the coolest dad. I wish they would have showed Gus more in the show.
Embry
2007-03-13 . chapter 1
That was precious!! i love it!!
Alex
2005-03-29 . chapter 1
Okay, so I actually don't even know what to say. I haven't reviewed a piece in so long that I've forgotten what to say, but this is so amazing for one reason or another that I couldn't ignore it. It's just so adorable and even though it's sad it's not... I don't know, I never was good at reviewing.

Brian's little line about "We ** aren't going anywhere" [complete with the "and, God help us, Ted"] was so perfect I just started laughing. Mostly because I could see it so perfectly coming out of his mouth.

And the part about screaming their love from rooftops and mountain peaks... Basically, I'm in love with this. Heh.

-Alex
badboyblondEsgurl
2005-02-22 . chapter 1
although im pretty sure you had intended for this story to just be a one-shot but i really hope that you reconsider! i think that this is a great idea for a story and that there should be more stories w/ gus in them. i know its kinda weird for QAF, but ive been toying w/ the idea of making an mpreg for the series...idk. but until i do decide, i would sincerely appreciate it if you could continue with this story cause i thought it was really great!

badboyblondEsgurl
Blair
2005-02-10 . chapter 1
Wow. That was great! I especially loved the line about Justin and Brian's love and how they 'scream it from mountain tops". Powerful.
Leah Claire
2004-12-18 . chapter 1
Wow, that was so great.

I think you did an excellent job of writing Gus's POV. So many people get children wrong by making them dumb or silly, but you completely avoided all that.
Me-Nuriko
2004-12-06 . chapter 1
Real love can never be anything but beautiful, regardless if you love someone of the same gender or the opposite one. You did a good job telling that in this story.
The story is good the way it is, but if you have any ideas for a continuation it wold be nice.
Incurably Yours
2004-12-02 . chapter 1
OMG...this was v. deep and touching. I loved this. The TV show is so ** awesome and this is was so good.
ZheM
2004-12-01 . chapter 1
I loved it. It turned out sweeter than I was afraid it would and that's better. I can't wait for the next season of QAF and reading this kinda sated my appetite for it a bit. Great story.
RosaleenBan
2004-11-10 . chapter 1
this is such a great story. I love it. I love how you portray Gus, and I really love the message. It's perfect. I hope to read a lot more from you!
Tanwen Micara
2004-11-07 . chapter 1
Aww that was so sweet! Really well-written ... more? Please?
Bell
2004-11-03 . chapter 1
That was really brillient, touching and deep, I hope you continue with this, very well written and moving.
KT
2004-11-03 . chapter 1
omg! that was such a powerful story. i loved how it was all about gus...it was so sweet and i absolutely adored the last line!! it was so poignant and touching!
Kessy Kate
2004-11-01 . chapter 1
Aw, this is so cute! It's really good too, please update soon!
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