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| Tulkas 2004-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThis looks very interesting. From the intro, it has the feel of a fairly long story and I like that. I'll admit that I've never even contemplated Keldorn/Jaheira before, but it does make some sense. Also, if this is to be a long one, there's a BG fanfiction board I know of that would welcome you with open arms. They love this sort of stuff. If you want the address, just email me. Keep up the good work, chief |
| Dominique Sotto 2004-11-03 ch 1, | abuseA good beginning and if you can believably set up Keldorn and Jaheira it will be an interesting read. I was not quite clear on what Keldorn was investigating in the beginning. CW's act as a lawful force in Athkatla, as far as BG is concerned, so there is no abduction, there is an arrest; if the Order or Keldorn personally considers it unlawful, or it is a matter of politics, I think it needs to be exanded. |
| Valerius Catullus 2004-10-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, now that's a *very* interesting premise for a story, never seen it before. I always thought Keldorn and Jaheira were well matched characterwise, but there were some pretty serious obstacles. I very much look forward to seeing this tale unfold:) |