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Reviews For: Journey's End

Tulkas
2004-11-03
ch 1,
abuseThis looks very interesting. From the intro, it has the feel of a fairly long story and I like that. I'll admit that I've never even contemplated Keldorn/Jaheira before, but it does make some sense.

Also, if this is to be a long one, there's a BG fanfiction board I know of that would welcome you with open arms. They love this sort of stuff. If you want the address, just email me. Keep up the good work, chief
Dominique Sotto
2004-11-03
ch 1,
abuseA good beginning and if you can believably set up Keldorn and Jaheira it will be an interesting read.

I was not quite clear on what Keldorn was investigating in the beginning. CW's act as a lawful force in Athkatla, as far as BG is concerned, so there is no abduction, there is an arrest; if the Order or Keldorn personally considers it unlawful, or it is a matter of politics, I think it needs to be exanded.
Valerius Catullus
2004-10-31
ch 1,
abuseWow, now that's a *very* interesting premise for a story, never seen it before. I always thought Keldorn and Jaheira were well matched characterwise, but there were some pretty serious obstacles. I very much look forward to seeing this tale unfold:)
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