 Evilclone 2005-11-05 . chapter 1grins truly spooky |
 crazy-ranger 2004-12-23 . chapter 1TWILIGHT ZONE!
nice... I did always wonder if anyone else would get any retaliation for going up against earth. And the whole earring thing is such a subtle but good detail they use in B5... I'm glad to see its not just me that goes "ah!" in "In the beginning." |
 Fondued Jicama 2004-11-05 . chapter 1Ganya.
I didn't catch that at all when I watched the show. It was only about six months later, when I read a fanfic, that I understood. I love the layers JMS puts in his work!
As for YOUR piece, it was original. Vignettes, though they irritate me because I'd like to have a big fat story to read, are often better; this proves that even more in my mind. You did a wonderful job with your descriptions, and with Susan. I agree with some of your other reviewers in the sense that I'm glad to see a Ganya fic, not a Marcus one. I love Marcus to death but it's hard to write his character.
Anyway, nice job! |
 Celebwen Telcontar 2004-11-05 . chapter 1I liked it. Ganya watching over Susan after he died... It's an interesting concept. Keep up the excellent writing.
CT |
 Neeri 2004-11-03 . chapter 1 I loved it.
Very sweet.
Neeri |
 Sheila51 2004-11-03 . chapter 1Damn that was good. Very good. Very, very good. *hands over lollies* |
 Nauri 2004-11-02 . chapter 1 Honestly, I am so glad it wasn't Marcus. I like Marcus as a character a lot, but he has been terribly overexposed in Ivanova-fics. It was a very good little story, and it rose from very good to exellent due to the last sentence. |
 Harry2 2004-11-01 . chapter 1The only person who would wear that earing would be either Talia or Marcus. And only Marcus would know how to fly a Star Fury. So Marcus is back from the dead so to speak. |
 Sabrina 2004-11-01 . chapter 1That was so well done! When Susan first suspected something I thought it might be Marcus, but your hinted answer was even better! I love the fact that her brother is watching out for her. Great story! |
 pol 2004-11-01 . chapter 1excellent once again! poor old susan, she just doesn't seem to get into the holiday spirit!
love the cutsy little twist at the end. good old ganya, i knew he'd be back someday...
so basically...loved it! |
 Bud 2004-11-01 . chapter 1 What a wonderful halloween-gift! This was a great story! Thank you! |