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Reviews for: Someone to Watch Over Me
Evilclone
2005-11-05 . chapter 1
grins truly spooky
crazy-ranger
2004-12-23 . chapter 1
TWILIGHT ZONE!

nice... I did always wonder if anyone else would get any retaliation for going up against earth. And the whole earring thing is such a subtle but good detail they use in B5... I'm glad to see its not just me that goes "ah!" in "In the beginning."
Fondued Jicama
2004-11-05 . chapter 1
Ganya.
I didn't catch that at all when I watched the show. It was only about six months later, when I read a fanfic, that I understood. I love the layers JMS puts in his work!
As for YOUR piece, it was original. Vignettes, though they irritate me because I'd like to have a big fat story to read, are often better; this proves that even more in my mind. You did a wonderful job with your descriptions, and with Susan. I agree with some of your other reviewers in the sense that I'm glad to see a Ganya fic, not a Marcus one. I love Marcus to death but it's hard to write his character.
Anyway, nice job!
Celebwen Telcontar
2004-11-05 . chapter 1
I liked it. Ganya watching over Susan after he died... It's an interesting concept. Keep up the excellent writing.

CT
Neeri
2004-11-03 . chapter 1
I loved it.
Very sweet.

Neeri
Sheila51
2004-11-03 . chapter 1
Damn that was good. Very good. Very, very good. *hands over lollies*
Nauri
2004-11-02 . chapter 1
Honestly, I am so glad it wasn't Marcus. I like Marcus as a character a lot, but he has been terribly overexposed in Ivanova-fics. It was a very good little story, and it rose from very good to exellent due to the last sentence.
Harry2
2004-11-01 . chapter 1
The only person who would wear that earing would be either Talia or Marcus. And only Marcus would know how to fly a Star Fury. So Marcus is back from the dead so to speak.
Sabrina
2004-11-01 . chapter 1
That was so well done! When Susan first suspected something I thought it might be Marcus, but your hinted answer was even better! I love the fact that her brother is watching out for her. Great story!
pol
2004-11-01 . chapter 1
excellent once again! poor old susan, she just doesn't seem to get into the holiday spirit!
love the cutsy little twist at the end. good old ganya, i knew he'd be back someday...
so basically...loved it!
Bud
2004-11-01 . chapter 1
What a wonderful halloween-gift! This was a great story! Thank you!
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