It would be awesome if you continued this story.

The notes are longer than the actual story.

Moar pl0x. IDC if it's a oneshot, I want MOAR.

Interesting plot, but, it was too short

How is this worthy of being a story? It's all of 6 lines and they aren't even something funny to make up for how lame this is. If you were going to continue this out, make this a super short teaser then it might be okay, but as it is right now you should just delete it.

Kewl story!

If you're going to write a Halloween episode then write it! These

two line episodes are getting old. Even if they are brilliant

ideas.

Ok, I'll be gentile...but honest. Frankly, I have absolutly no clue what is going on...at all. That's all that I have to say.

this story is cool...I kind of wonder if you could continue the story? Maybe let Xellos/Xander hack some chaos? After Xellos could be say one of the most knowledgable character in anime world and my favorite character...

Oh good lord... Xander and Xelloss in the same body, if thats not a recipe for disaster I don't know what is...