"...worked as a baker on Diagon Alley"
That and the "gadfly... gallifrey" were the parts which I thought were great.

I love the Doctor Who references. I think they're well placed, they fit. I like the story in general... amusing and clever but not ridiculously goofy :D And plenty of shippyness.

I really like what you're doing with this series.
It's fun and feels true to the books.
It's nice to get a better feel to how Tonks & Remus's relationship develops.
I don't review a lot. :(
Sorry- I know the authors appreciate hearing what people think.

Thanks for all you've done.
keep up the great work.

lol! just finnished reading this one!
Fred and George are so funny!
and the way you used the nursery rhyme in the story was briliant!
loved both chapters and am glad that those parts from the story have been filled out lol!

I love Fred and George!
That is so something that they would do- rip apart and inoccent stool to beat around an old clock haha.
I thought that was a nice chapter.
I liked the little moment at the end with lupin and tonks that was sweet.:)

this was definately another very funny one!!
I liked your little nursery rythme spell (I actually didn't see that comeing until the mouse was mentioned)

I'm glad I found this! ^_~

I really enjoyed your take on that memorable afternoon, and all the little quirky references that brought a smile. Thanks for sharing the story!

Wow.This two chapters were completely action packed.And it was good to see Tonks and Remus helping the trio,Ginny,Fred and George in cleaning the house.
Hm..can't wait to read more

Bwahahaha!!

Thank you, I love Doctor Who, and to have them weaved so effortlessly into this was brilliant. I started bouncing when you mentioned Gallifrey, hee hee. Adore your take on Tonk/Lupin.

Wow...that was good. And funny. I like funny. But I can imagine Remus wanting to be with someone who can change themselves to look like an old woman.

I absolutely adored the nursery rhyme reference! The way you portrayed it as a spell was masterful. I've always entertained the idea that nursery rhymes and the like came from old witches' (and wizards') spells, along with fairy tales. I love seeing that I'm not the only one. :D
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Ah the golden age of Dr Who, plastic props and crap special effects, we will never see its like again (sniff).

This series is so good and your characterisation of Remus & Tonks is both sweet and credible.

You had me laughing out loud with the Doctor Who references. Nice chapter, I liked the twins having fun with the cursed clock.

Toilet of terror and random bum checks...kind of a theme you've got going here. LOL I like how Remus is loosening up a bit around Tonks.

:)

That 'Ching. Whack. Slam.' bit was cute. The nursery rhyme was cute, but not nearly as good as 'Remus John the Lupins son' in A Kiss is just a Kiss. That was funny. Anyway, you definitely made the whole clock bit a lot funnier than it was in OotP! You've got a great sense of humor.