OMG!UPDATE NOW!

i like update soon!

hey i like this story but if your going to mix two different languages in your story please leave translations at the bottom...the entire exchange between hinatat and sasuke was completely lost on me...

Hooray, a decent AU fanfic.
Good chapter, UPDATE SOON.

I really like sasukexhinata pairings too but naruto and hinata is still good...im in a really happy mood so i'll even go for sasukexnaruto..

WAH! so cute...wells plz continue...er... GO YOU!

Nice chapter. I totally love Sasu/Hina too so even if it's one sided, I'll still love it. I hope you update soon. I totally love how Neji was all worrying about Hinata.

nice to see a fic that has naruto as you say head over heels for hinata but too bad you didnt have em still be ninjas.

update soon!

I don't see how he was a bully. All I know is that he is impatient. Other than that, cute story.

it's pretty good... I like how you handled it... and Naruto seems IC

cool

Excelent story, seeing Naruto as having anger problems sort of shows him in a new light, plus the fact that Hinata isnt head over heels for him makes a fun twist. Id love too see it in a sequel, or even a multi chapter story. Who knows?

It's cute. I enjoyed it.

I liked the general idea, and it started nicely, but Naruto went from 'badass unrespectful troublemaker' to 'poor boy with issues who needs a hugh' way, way too fast. This concept needs three or four, maybe even five chapters to be properly developed. It's too complex for a one-shot. Because of that, the end looked corny.

Also, you may hate me for this, but I'll repeat it again. Your verbal tenses are terrible. You must contact someone to correct them for you before you post.