OMG OMG OMG are ya gonna finish it! I loved it! Whens the next chapter!

good!i love it!

L-O-V-E! LOVE! for Squall and Rinoa! _ Love it! something id happening! woohoo! - Thanks for the update! hope you update soon...agian! _

This is a really good story and I love it! Great job!

nice one!Ü oh goody, you updated! after so long!Ü

this was a great chapter... more jealousy from Rinoa!Ü hehe. this would make the story even more interesting.

keep it up!

update soon.

take care,

Lady-Rinoa

Long time. :). It was great (and funny) all the interaction between Squall and both girls. Hope to see an update soon. Thank you.

wa... this is great, this is really great... plz update soon... _

looking forward to more

love the story! love the way you exprees how the main lovers fealings, too. just work on you grammer & you'll be good to go.

cool story i like!

Hey, I think you improved in your writing skills. _ It's good that you elaborated more on their thoughts, making it more detailed. Keep that up and the story should be better.

please, please, update soon

ok nice.

this storyline seems ok and ya good. but is it a squall rinoa? i hope so.

ya goo stroy so far update soon!