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noylj
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Details!
Is the base story complete?
brigrove
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
I know you intended it that way, but for me, this jumped around rather too much
Harmony is Key
2009-09-28 . chapter 3
i can honestly say, that, that was the weirdest, most confusing fic i have every read.. but i liked it! :)
Hi
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
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Shadows-of-Realm
2009-07-06 . chapter 3
AMazing SERIES! KEEP IT UP!
Mondkalb
2008-08-11 . chapter 3
well this is kinda sad... but there isnt much to be happy at that time, is there? with Dumbledore dead and Hermione being Maura...
but nice style I really like it

Mondy
broken.wings.
2006-01-01 . chapter 3
Wow...heartbreaking...
Black is the New Pink
2005-09-12 . chapter 3
I liked it. Explained the drama of Harry and Ginny in your other two stories.

Defy Gravity
harrypassion
2005-08-24 . chapter 3
not bad to say the least
LittleTom45
2005-08-11 . chapter 3
You know, this is the third time I have read this story and now I'm about to read the rest of the series again. I still think this is the best piece of writing on this website. You really do have a knack for writing. I just love the way you spin and make us feel the stories.
DaddysGirlForever
2005-06-07 . chapter 3
Make Harry and Gin get together they were so good together. Your story was great I just LOVE Harry and Ginny together. It sucks. :]
Jedi Knight Bus
2005-03-31 . chapter 3
BAWL! so sad...but i've read Harry Potter and the Power of Truth, so i know what happens and such...EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT!
Perenelle
2005-02-26 . chapter 3
Wow. The end. So that's what happened? Goes along with the story exactly. Some don't really fit the story but this one was perfect. Great job! Now I have to work my way through the rest of your work. Magnificant job!
~Perenelle
Perenelle
2005-02-26 . chapter 2
Last chapter was so...happy...and this one was o sad and stressful! Will the next chapter start with 'eighteen year old Harry Potter...' as the last ones did? Well how did Harry and Ron keep the outstanding bodies they gained during auror training? They must have lost a little bit of their muscle not being able to afford so much workout time in their later years. 30 calories a day! That's insane! Well keep up the good work!
~Perenelle
Perenelle
2005-02-26 . chapter 1
This is familiar. All those shadowey alcoves and the kiss from after the quidditch game. The picture at his proposal. That was sweet of her to tie her hair up with a pencil again for the ball. That certainly ended...um...interestingly. So did it start as a game with Luna or not? Good job!
~Perenelle
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