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JaMisa27 2/15/11 . chapter 1
HELL YEAH NOW WE'RE GETTING SOMEWHERE LOL!
xartxisxaxbangx 1/4/11 . chapter 5
Itachi and Kisame are the cutest pair ever. You rock.
xartxisxaxbangx 1/4/11 . chapter 4
I like the use of Tartarus, that was really original (:
xartxisxaxbangx 1/4/11 . chapter 2
I LOVED THE ENDING! AWESOME.
xartxisxaxbangx 1/4/11 . chapter 1
damn, Hinata is so freaky. But I love it. Update soon!
Fan of Hina-chan 6/11/10 . chapter 5
OMG I can feel Her fear!

Your so good at writing please write more on this story?
jkhp23d9785 4/18/10 . chapter 5
it goo i like it you should keep going
xXLooney-chanXx 2/28/10 . chapter 5
Oh, i want more soo badly! please please PLEASE update soon! I'm begging you!
xXLooney-chanXx 2/28/10 . chapter 1
"They screamed and screamed and got mad."

I love that line! It's so...psychotic. Love it! reading more...
YingYang890 12/14/08 . chapter 5
Hell! That was so funny! I can't wait for your next chepter and see what kind of person Satan is, excluding him being a really powerful person
Minty95 10/27/08 . chapter 5
wow kwaly cant wait till the next chapter!:D
Rakero-chan 7/1/08 . chapter 5
I hope Hinata doesn't have to kill Kisame for his perverted actions...It would be funny though.
Kurogani 6/7/08 . chapter 1
is hinata in the akatsuki
SlytherinClassof07 5/4/08 . chapter 5
I laugh each time I read about Kisame being punched into the wall.
Selonianth 5/3/08 . chapter 5
you do know that in calling the person that founded the place a dante freak that makes you one
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