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| fascimility 2006-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseThis one, again, was lovely. I didn't understand at first, but when I got to the end I just kinda stopped, stunned for the moment. Absulute brilliance. |
| narrizan 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abusethis is oh so sad. but no less beauteous because of it. :zan |
| C.T 2004-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good.Rather fascinating was the fact that Komiya had already died when he called Kubota...You have a rather unique and creepy way of portraying things that makes the reader read and ponder on the chapter carefully before he gets the true meaning of the what the words are trying to say.You're really good at covering up things ^_^ |
| lark lavroc 2004-11-09 ch 1, | abuseOh, that packed one heck of a punch. I really liked the way you've set everything up. At first, I thought this was set back in the days when Komiya was alive, but then as it progressed along, there were little hints and then...the end. Which, even though I was aware of, still worked emotionally well. The repetitive use of 'Komiya is calling' is great. It's also creepy in the subtext that he's calling from the grave for Kubota to join him. |
| Chou ni Natte 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really understand in the end..i'm not very smart about reading between the lines or hints. Hehe. Anyway,. was it about when Komiya died? Argh, that was so sad. Anyway, that was really good. |
| Anthey Oom 2004-11-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story, I like your writing style. but... what'd you do with poor Tokitou? He got picked up and disappeared? Missing Tokitous aside, I find the story intriguing. It would be quite a surprise if the Toujou did end up with Komiya's cell phone. |