I can't beleive this hasn't gotten more reviews. It's amazing. The characters are all beautifully in character and the I could definitly see this happening. You showed the relationships between them very well.

I loved how you characterized Starfire. Not many people can pull off the strong-yet-shy thing as well as you can.

That was amazing!

I like even numbers, so to make this your 18th review, that was really touching and gave a new outlook on the emotions that went unspoken in the episode. Like you, I happen to love watching Danny Phantom and Teen Titans, read the comics by DC, it'll make your head spin. This obsession is not one that I would admit willingly but always happy to find someone who shares my ineterest. Love your stories, wish there wasn't so many teasing little one-shots.

Please continue your story. It is very true, and I hope to see how it develops with Starfire and Robin.
(Will Beast Boy every be well again? LOL!)

This was a very different view. Usually it's Robin and Starfire talking after Haunted, but this was a welcome change.

Now, I'm sure you intended it, but you made Robin seem so vain and heartless. This, too, was an interesting perspective, although it was painful to hear.

All in all, it was a very refreshing fic, and now I am ready to go back to the way overdone kiss on the rooftop scene. Thank you and keep it up.

is this only a one-shot? aw good job its a good story

One nitpick:

“Cyborg?” He turned at the sound of her voice.

“How do you do it?”

“Do what?” He shook his head at her words. She really didn’t know.

“Care? Worry? How do you put everyone else, even those who don’t deserve it, before yourself?”

It's not very clear who's speaking here. I was wondering why Starfire was using contractions for a second.

Besides that...impeccable.

omg..am I CRYING? crap...

hehe! This was saddening. But, uplifting. Showing the darker side of the whole rob/star relationship really brings into persepective how close they would be if they ever truly got together..WHICH THEY WILL SOMEDAY! lol.

but you wrote this beautifully, really- capturing the stubborness and DUMBNESS of robin's whole "i-dont-want-to-heal-my-past-so-ill-stay-in-my-room-and-deny-my-feelings-for-star" attitude, while star's emotions of "im-so-full-of-forgiveness-that-even-when-robin-hurt-me-i-still-love-him-and-i-beleive-in-him."

..I honestly couldnt come up with a better way to explain the greatness of the story- sad, i know! haha.

anyways, this is definitly going under favorites. and although I'd love to read a forgiveness story with robin confessing and all, i wont bug you. this story is awesome enough. keep it up!

swiss

Wow. Thank you for so thoroughly understanding Starfire's character. I truly loved this fic.

i really enjoy your writing... ive read a few stories of yours and i see one common theme... robin and star. you are a wonderful writer and i would be interested in seeing what you can do with other couples. i realize you support the rob/star pairing, but i am curious to see what you can do with others... rae/bb... bb/star... rae/rob... cy/star... so on... just for fun to see where you could take it... i always find it interesting to see authors get creative with different pairing even though they dont support them. anyways... great story... i look forward to reading more

Update soon. JUST JOKING!

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A wonderful fic! everybody's in character and it ties in very well with the episode. great job! ^_^

I liked it...however, I do wish you would have shown something of the after affect...like Star talking to robin or the other way around...but either way...good job :)

Very, very nice. I really enjoyed the connection you've given each character in trying to cope with Robin almost going insane. I do say though, it is a shame that we didn't get to hear B.B. side. Well it makes sense since he isn't really wouldn't fit to well. But seriously, good job. Hope to read more.