Wow... very bittersweet. I've got lump stuck in my throat now lol. Good job.

Gah! That made me cry; I hope you're happy!
Very emotional read- caught serious!Jiraya perfectly and young!Kakashi was dead-on as well.

:goes off to get tissues and sniffles:

Beautifully written und well thought through. Thanks!

That was an awesome story. It was really poignant.

It could be recent events, but a fanfic has never made me cry before. This was so beautiful. Thanks.

That was so cute!
I'm glad I read it.
:)

Poor Kakashi. The fact that he was so young to get where he did and the fact that he's lost so many people along makes him such an interesting character. This was an interesting little slice of how things were and how Kakashi suffered at the loss of his teacher. The voice shift at the end was a little weird since the story went from refering to Kakashi as he and other third person pronouns to refering to him with you instead. I know some of this was probably to show Jiraya's feelings and thoughts as he steps in to prevent Kakashi from dieing, but I think the story would flow a little better sticking to one voice the whole way through. Anyway, overall nicely done little story and I really like the fact that we get to see Kakashi attempting to deal with his losses but by telling the story from Jiraya's point of veiw it preserves the illusion off aloofness and mystery that is Kakashi.
Cheers,
Shavaineth

very well written. I loved everything. Maybe you could change it though so that Jaraiya says he will be there for him when he wakes.

awesome fic. great job ^_^

I was about to cry...but the last line made me laugh! two kunias up!!LOVE IT! MAKE MORE!

awesome sauce. that was a pretty great take on that situation. it was written well, i usually don't like first person but this was fine.

You made my cry in this...I absolutly love fics with Kakashi and Yondaime, and even if this was from Jirayas point of wiew, it still was one of the best fic I've read.

Ooh, I loved the narrative tone of this fic. And this fic was quite as depressing as some of the Yondy fics are... it ended on a good note. So yay, that makes me happy!

That's a genius. Every words left me, because the reasons and course of events were thought up so damn well and convincingly. And the last sentence... *in tears* No, it caught me from idealistic idiot. *more tears*
Thank you.

Awesome.