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| CamiH 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseYou can without a doubt be proud... ^^ |
| aznraven 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abusenot supposed to like? what the hell?! this is fanfiction! u can like whateva u wanta like and write whatever u damn well feel like. anywho, now that i'n done lecturing you, it was a great poem. i liked it and i was kinda looking for a noin/mar pairing to see how it would turn out...don't get me wrong, i love chia/mar but most of them aren't finished and i already read the others.nice twist, really thought provoking. |
| Angela 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a lovely poem. I love the imagery you used, especially in the line "The shackles of heaven fell from my form". This is one moment where Maron gets to choose her path herself - everything else was set up for her - and it's interesting that she chooses this path, that this is where she can be "Maron" instead of "Jeanne". Anyway, I love the poem; it's powerful in its wording, and it still seems true to the series, despite the not-so-canon pairing. ^o^ |
| Kazumi 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abusegreat poem...i could never write anything like that *sighs* It's a pity you dont have many reviews, it's really good! |
| Baka-Karu 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, it's very deep and nice! |
| Skittles1 2004-11-02 ch 1, | abuseWow that was very deep!! Wonderful job! Kudos! =) |
| Crow Skywalker 2004-11-02 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I love that pairing as well :) |