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Reviews For: Walking Past Heaven's Gate

CamiH
2007-08-01
ch 1,
abuseYou can without a doubt be proud... ^^
aznraven
2006-12-14
ch 1, anon.
abusenot supposed to like? what the hell?! this is fanfiction! u can like whateva u wanta like and write whatever u damn well feel like.

anywho, now that i'n done lecturing you, it was a great poem. i liked it and i was kinda looking for a noin/mar pairing to see how it would turn out...don't get me wrong, i love chia/mar but most of them aren't finished and i already read the others.nice twist, really thought provoking.
Angela
2006-02-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a lovely poem.

I love the imagery you used, especially in the line "The shackles of heaven fell from my form".

This is one moment where Maron gets to choose her path herself - everything else was set up for her - and it's interesting that she chooses this path, that this is where she can be "Maron" instead of "Jeanne".

Anyway, I love the poem; it's powerful in its wording, and it still seems true to the series, despite the not-so-canon pairing. ^o^
Kazumi
2005-02-17
ch 1,
abusegreat poem...i could never write anything like that *sighs* It's a pity you dont have many reviews, it's really good!
Baka-Karu
2005-01-20
ch 1,
abuseWow, it's very deep and nice!
Skittles1
2004-11-02
ch 1,
abuseWow that was very deep!! Wonderful job! Kudos! =)
Crow Skywalker
2004-11-02
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. I love that pairing as well :)
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