I like how Zephyr Wings was going. When will Mai figures out that Joey is in the land of the living. Would love to see whats going to happen next.

I am reading this... so please update...

It's really really cool!

plz update it is so cool!

wowo this si really good..._ I hope for you to continue... _

OMG! what a great story! T_T it is so touching...i love your interpretation of heaven! it kind of reminds me of the book The Five People You Meet in Heaven...and kind of like Dante's Inferno if you have ever read any of those books because i am reading Inferno right now...and it also reminds of that movie that just came out..i think its called birth...i also like your interpation of how souls age in heaven! excelent story...poor mai is suicidal...T_T...joey will help her hopefully...it is good that you also put a nice kind soul in the world to help joey...well please update soon! i absolutely love this story!

You're a very good writer. I could practically feel my feet aching as if they had glass stuck in them. Thats some powerful imagery you got there!

*coughs* I can't wait for Mai's entrance! It should be good _ Oh, and are any other YGO characters going to be in here or is this just an AU JoeyxMai?

*Faith Kaiba*

o_O

urine?

_ lurved it though! yay!

this is very good please continue this.

i like it. please continue.

boring, stupid...eh...what else can i say?

The plot is enthralling, I'm so glad you posted another J/M. Out of all the others out there, yours shine the brightest. Your skills as a writer take the prospective romance between the two and brings it to new levels, all the while exploring so many areas in their characters. Lovely beginning, looking forward to more.

aw.. please update soon.. I LOVE Jou/Mai!

Wai! A decent JoeyxMai fic!

This reminds me of that movie...with Nicole Kidman (I think it's her).. "Birth". I want to see that...*coughs* Ahem.

This sounds like a very promising story, I hope you continue!

*Faith Kaiba*

Yay, another JouxMai fic! Seems like a really great premise _ Poor Mai though! As always, loving your fics! Looking foward to an update :)

*huggles* _ whee! a new Jou/Mai story!

Galen...hm where have i heard that name before...''

kk

woot!