personally, it didn't seem as good as your other ones, but that's just me. I don't really like the band of seven and what they did while they were still alive. it really just seemed like there was no real emotion to play with on this one. well, keep up the good work, dark

why would kagome have a connection with zengi? this was a good story and it was interesting how you discribed how each of the girls were murdered. in the show 'charmed' there was an episode that a trio of old women dug up fresh male corpses and sewed together the skin to summon a demon into the body to give them youth. It didn't turn out that good for them in the end to say politely and to not ruin the end. keep up the good work, dark

freaky. Just freaky. I did like it though, almost as much as the moment while reading it. I almost and scared to read the Halloween one...*help*

this one was really good. i actually liked it more than the halloween one, even if it was less violent

the demon's name, you took a common word and changed it into the demon. good job and I might even use this next year as an all hallow's eve thriller. good work, dark

that was a bit of a shocker, now I have to read your first chapter. personally, I tried to celebrate yule this year, but my mom is one of those "yeah you can have your own religion, but your COMING TO CHURCH" people. good work, dark

if only there was more violence! and it seemed a little on the short side, but otherwise i liked it, especially the part where the guy's throat is ripped open and his vocal chords are hanging out of his neck.

if only there was more violence! and it seemed a little on the short side, but otherwise i liked it, especially the part where the guy's throat is ripped open and his vocal chords are hanging out of his neck.

wow, that was gory.

it was most appropriate for haloween. good job. the only other comment i'd like to make, is that some parts of your story aren't completely explained. as the writer, i'm sure it's clear to you, but as i reader, i became somewhat confused a number of times. perhaps you might consider having someone read over the story before you post it next time, to point out any unclear parts. . that's all. great story!

Sky

he he. sweet... sex and killing and stuff... he he

wow i liked it. its nice to see a story with actull wiccan and pagen based facts about witches and everything. i also hope you enjoy your samhain this year...nice job

I love you now. _ A fanfiction modeled after a pagan holiday, eh? Sarcasm towards the cliche idea of witches? Spelling magic, magick?

Yup. I love you now. _

Great story, I'll add it onto my favorites when I get home... Keep up the wonderful work!

I hope you had a lovely Samhain. Blessings be with you.

Keera