 Tar Irene 2005-05-19 . chapter 1Yeah fragmets! You need to just change the settings on the grammar check, that's all.. oh, and season 4 doesn't air where I live either, but there's this nice little thing called bitorrent which means you don't *have* to wait for the stupid tv stations to get their butts in gear and everything dubbed..
Right, the actual story? Way cute. Love Vaughn, your writing is excellent and this is half-sad, half-funny.. great job. And I so do not hate the wrinkle, it's just part of what makes him so cute.. |
 moonmouse 2005-03-16 . chapter 1i love the way it's written! so dramatic, and yet about a wrinkle. bravo my friend bravo. |
 Vaughnzangel 2005-03-07 . chapter 1DATS AWFUL!
VAUGHN IS SO KoOl!
~amanda |
 She's a Star 2004-12-11 . chapter 1Hahaha!! Magnificently profound and so . . . well, true. I love it. :) |
 KissMeI'mIrish07 2004-11-13 . chapter 1i have one thing to say - LOL
That was so funny, i never thought about the wrinkle that much, now i cant stop thinking about it.. i'll have to add it into my storys now. |
 The Princess that is Radical 2004-11-02 . chapter 1 Very good, pretty funny, but i haven't watched alias, so i don't really know what he looks like, The Wrinkle was Vaughn... hehehe, bye! |
 tiffany 2004-11-02 . chapter 1 LOL this blurb made me laugh. (: |
 MalferretLover 2004-11-02 . chapter 1lolS! it was funny! |
 RosieW 2004-11-02 . chapter 1Hehe I hate the wrinkle... its annoying I call it the farrows of doom... not quiet sure way. Someone once said to me you could plant patatos in those wrinkles... I tend to agree. Anyhow much loved this, I was much amused (damn I thought I was going to start making sense soon but las it will never be) You know what... I think this might get a place in favourite stories... I mean I just don't have enough funny ones in there. Oh the Wrinkle. |
 pocket mouse (the good one) 2004-11-02 . chapter 1 SHOUT OF GLEE
we! so seriously silly! |