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Baby-Atemu
2007-06-15 . chapter 1
aw... that was nice... i like it...
^^ thank you...
~*~BabyAtemu~*~
Lilied
2006-03-22 . chapter 2
wow...i really like yr stories...specially dis one...bittersweet huh?? keep up d good work!
Khion Lore
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
OMG! This story was absolutely beautiful. I was very well written and I'm going to add you to my favs and R & R all your stories.

This is a magnificent chapter brilliant description of the events taking place. I loves it and I gives it 11 out of 5.

~Chaos
gallandro-83
2004-11-20 . chapter 1
Nice one shot, I liked the ending of Voldemort, most times it seems like his defeat is too simple or something, this ending was very surreal and magical. I can just see something like this happening where his parents somehow trigger something inside of him that was always there.

gallandro_83
Dreamer22
2004-11-19 . chapter 1
I liked that, very well written, very moving and emotional
Kiirby
2004-11-07 . chapter 2
Hey, I was looking at fiction press but I can't seem to find you. ^^; May I ask what your story is called?
neurotica5684
2004-11-06 . chapter 1
hey! too lazy to login today.. lol
loved this story! I am speechless!! Loved the whole Lily/James coming back to help Harry... Loved seeing Lily chew Peter out!! I think i might actually cry in a second- it was that good! Anyways, going to check out your other story! keep up the AWESOME work!
Lady of Masbolle
2004-11-06 . chapter 2
I shall readit once i get time to go on to your bio...which will be soon! I'm Fire's Child on fictionpress but i gave up writing because i adore fanfiction! Please please add the next chappie! Im dying here!
Kiirby
2004-11-05 . chapter 1
Hey! I loved this chapter and I would be extremely interested in reading an original fiction of yours. Your a suberb writer! Can't wait to read more of your works!
holyheartbreak
2004-11-05 . chapter 1
That was so rad. I'm glad Harry got to see his parents again. When they were saying goodbye, I got all teary. And the ending was sentimental too.

Great story =)
jazzie kings
2004-11-04 . chapter 1
Again OMG. I love this story it fits in perfectly before Gettin to Know you. it's like the missing piece that was found. My favorite part was:

James raised an eyebrow and looked at Lily beside him. “What’d he say just now?
GiGiFanFic
2004-11-03 . chapter 1
oh,Merlin! this was the very best short/long fic ever. I worried, and cried . it was fabulous, and I thank you so much for "Broken"
Lady of Masbolle
2004-11-02 . chapter 1
brilliant fic dude!
reading-rider
2004-11-02 . chapter 1
Very nicely done! I can see this story fitting in nicely before GETTING TO KNOW YOU. They're the same Harry. Thanks for the fun!
maraudermagick
2004-11-02 . chapter 1
wow... have I told you how mush I love your writing?
You're so great but the elemental idea was trite... heheh vocab word... bad me. sorry, it was just a little overused but hey, that's ok. keep up the great work!
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