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| archiev 2006-05-30 ch 25,  | abuseI like it, any more? |
| archiev 2006-05-04 ch 25, anon. | abuseDon't stop now! |
| Speakfire 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story and the whole premise behind it. However I found that the lack of quotations in verbal dialogue in the first few chapters and the changes of perspective in regards to who this story is being told by very confusing. It made reading the story a lot more work, and I frequently had backtrack and say "Wait, what was that again? Who's saying this?" |
| Darklight 2006-02-06 ch 25, | abuseKeep teh parts coming. |
| rankokunalpha1 2006-02-06 ch 25, | abusewow loved mailman i hope as you write the other stories yo u add in little vignettes of what happens to mailman! |
| Evilclone 2005-05-27 ch 21, | abusesome righteous teaching Woop woop, bout time the Colonels started kicking **! Brilliant, don't keep me waiting another five months! GRs |
| rankokunalpha1 2005-05-27 ch 21, | abusewow now this is great i cant wait for more chapters! glad to see your writing is back up to what it was! keep up the great writing man! |
| Evilclone 2005-03-06 ch 19, | abuseOh... So Colonial forces already knew about Earth, interesting. So how come Roslyn hasn't mentioned the golden arrow yet, and how come they haven't found Kobol! And another point the Earth's system is being reinforced, makes me wonder how many ships are actually in the sol system... One last point Excelsior knows about the internet...wow... then they must know about tv... bem bem bem we wait with baited breath for the next chapter, hurry up man yer killing us!! |
| Stone Cold 2005-03-06 ch 19, anon. | abuseAwesome. I love this parallel story. It is really frakkin awesome. So the Pegusus is alive too huh? |
| rankokun alpha 2005-03-06 ch 19, | abuseahh man i mean thats just mean making us wait to find out what the plan for revenge is! ohh and i founds the story about the war with the anshen thanks! |
| Stone Cold 2005-02-18 ch 17, anon. | abuseAwesome. We really need more parts of this, and 7 Points. I love the universes you've built. |
| Evilclone 2005-01-29 ch 17, | abusehm interesting, so there's two ships now and another possible third battlestar |
| rankokun alpha 2005-01-28 ch 17, | abuseokay your a arsehole for cliffhanging these stories! argh! |
| Innogen 2005-01-20 ch 13, | abuseokay. I'm hooked. Innogen Nice action told from first person POV! |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 2005-01-15 ch 13, anon. | abuseHIS IS A REALY GOOD STORY. |