I love it. I hope you are going to still write it.

You seem to enjoy torturing us readers with such great crossovers. It's brilliant! The two universes are not being forced at all to play out well. It looks like you had took time to plan out each and every chapter. Yet, you torture the readers with one or two chapters before you abandon them. Argh!

Whatever your intentions, good or evil, I must say: "Well played, good sir."

This was building to be a really good story, but I am afraid that it has been abandoned.

I hope you'll be updating and continuing this story. I'm glad Harry won against the Goauld.

Good story. Will this be finished?

Hm very interesting! I can't wait to see how this plays out.

BlackRose

I'm going to assume you're still alive.

Although I enjoy this story (an interesting mix of both Stargate SG1 and Harry Potter, from pre season 7, and book 5), it appears to have been abandoned.

Or the muse has vacated the premises. Looking at your profile, either life's not giving you time to write fanfiction, or new interests have lured you away from completing an in progress story.

Still, the characterization is good, and letting Fawkes (plus prophecy/curse) appear in the introduction and middle was a nice touch.
Don't want to wait to see more of Bill and Daniel. Will wait impatiently if I have too!

Length is good, and Love the quality. Good start, now what about the finish?

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

hey is this abandoned?

Cool story! I hope you update soon!

Quite possibly the most intriguing SG1/HP crossover I've seen. This shows way too much promise to be abandoned. Any chance of a revival?

This is pretty unique. Have you noticed that Teal'c is basically a plot device?

You are a very good writer. This flows well and has an excellent blance of exposition, dialogue and action. I hope you return to it at some point!

please write more i want to know what happens and what Meneris will do

Pretty good - although I haven't seen Stargate I can still basically follow what's going on - can you be slightly more descriptive when it comes o them and their things? Thanks