omg! *sobs* this is so so unbelievably sad! this is one of the few fics that made me cry..*sniffs* i wish harry went back to the AU world in the end...

*clutches at heart*

Wow. I really didn't want it to end like that. It was so sad, but it was somehow beautiful. I can't help feeling that Harry didn't belong in the other world, even though that Severus is there for him. It's so very tragic that he makes the monumental and self-sacrificing effort to come back thinking that he has to destroy Voldemort or the world will be lost ... only to find that Voldemort is gone--along with most of the people he cared about. Talk about twisting the knife.

In my head (I hope you don't mind), there's a sequel where this Severus and Harry eventually sort themselves out ^_^

loved it!

That was way too sad! Good job.

Oh Tangledhair, that was intensely and tragically romantic. I'm waiting for your sequel to ABL to be finished before I read it. This proved wonderful to pass the time.

Okay, I liked the story and all, but if Harry truly loved Snape and was bonded to him, why did he want to go back in the first place? That is the part that doesn't make any sense to me. He's just hurting both himself and Severus through those actions, and he won't be gaining anything through returning. He will only be losing.

A bit confusing towards the end... Though I was able to reason out that the potion Harry made was a kind of memory potion... What confused me was the purpose of the memory and whether Harry and the Severus from his origanal world really didn't get together...

I don't know what to make of this. I enjoyed it yes, but I'm still lost on how to take it... ah, well, it was very well written. I'm just not awake yet.

"THE FORGOTTEN" -Kai aka Naniwoiutennen

Hm. I seem to have this... preocupation w/ people being absolutely broken or completely miserable b/c the person they love doesn't want them in a very brutal way and there's no way to change their mind. OR else they're happy.
But I still like this one.

Novocaine

Oh. My. God. It is absolutely brilliant.

Continue! What happens next? What happened to the bond? What about the other Severus?

Sniff! After first reading it in the afternoon, I just dismissed the story, but it came back to haunt me time and again, so by midnight I had read it at least three times and was close to tears, which really doesn't happen all that often. Great writing, now I'm off to read your other fics, this was my first.
Thanks for sharing!

That was amazing. You should continute.

wow. I love it. the part when he's remembering the other universe and severus was amazing...

This was bloody wonderful. The only way I think you could have made it better is if you had dragged it out a little more. You know setup the relationships between the two Snapes a little more and having Harry express the difficulty in dealing with the sudden change in personalities. But hey thats just my oppinion.