That was very nice writing. I loved the metaphors and similes that you used, as well as how you phrased your descriptive passages and used the characters' voices. I can see a sequel where the *Fea* gets a physical body and goes after Aragorn and Legolas for revenge (and/or desire), but I can also see this as the whole of a spirit's (fea's) view on ME life.
Good writing, in any case. Really.

Great story, very well written, unusual viewpoint - I love the way the homeless spirit sees (and describes) the two embodied presences and their activities firstly through their spirits and recognizes their bodies more through their connection to those spirits! Great writing, here! he mood is thrilling, and the description of the attack is greatly done. I love the ending, too. Now one wonders: iif this is the birth of a new Warg, a wolf who will find himself inhabited by this fea, or will it manage to gethimself a hapless human or orc?

Greatly done and fully in canon! onderful story!
Thank you!

Aislynn

That was good! It was so interesting!