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| rankokun alpha 2004-11-29 ch 5,  | abusei loved it cant wait to read the continuation! |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-20 ch 5, | abuseNice ending, though why did T'Les have to buy the Vulcan farm? ;-) Nice scene with T'Pol and her mother. At this point, they can both 'joke' about how they've acted towards one another, and I'm glad T'Les actually gave her blessing on her daughter's feelings towards Trip. I know Trip means well when he's trying to be noble about T'Pol being married and all, but why did I just want to wack him on the head when he told T'Pol that she has Koss for help with meditation? Okay, just as last time I almost liked Koss, now I want to throttle him thoroughly for going back on his word to dissolve the union! AHH! I almost wihed he didn't back down so T'Pol *could* throttle him! Again, nice story...keep writing! It makes the coming winter pass better! ;-) |
| Deb 2004-11-17 ch 5, anon. | abuseI enjoyed your story tremondously, if was inciteful, challenging and true to life. However what happened to Chapter 3 and 4. I see the end of Chapter 2 and then the skip; to Chapter 5. I would love to know what happened that drew Enterprise to Vulcan and how T'Les was involved. Please submit. Thanks |
| Cherilynn64 2004-11-14 ch 5, | abuseThat. Was. Wonderful. :-) |
| Rinne 2004-11-11 ch 5, | abuseNicely done take on their relationship. |
| Lee Goshabyn 2004-11-11 ch 5, | abuseIt was a good story. Sorry about T'Pol's mother too. Still a very good story. |
| JennaTripped 2004-11-11 ch 5, | abuseAwesome ending. I loved this story. |
| bravo six 2004-11-11 ch 5, | abuseAw! Lovely! And yes, it was sad that T'Les died, but the ending made up for it! =D |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-10 ch 4, | abuseAh! Cliffhangers! How's the VHC going to take a human breaking and entering into Directorate? Good to see Trip and Koss reach some common ground, especially when it comes to T'Pol. |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-10 ch 3, | abuseI'm guessing the touching of two fingers is the Vulcan equivalent of a kiss? Surpised Trip didn't notice any reaction from the other Vulcans...or maybe he just didn't care. Damn, now you make me almost like Koss since he is so ready to admit that the marriage was basically a sham and only care for his planet's sake. Not to mention how readily he is to dissolve it after all the business is done with. Glad to see Archer acting more of a friend, for the moment, than as a captain to Trip. With Vulcan in so much trouble, God forbid they get invaded! |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-10 ch 2, | abuseT'Pol is acting a little jealous there, isn't she? You definitely have those two down pat in terms of interaction. Keep it up! |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuseDammit, I missed too much of last season to know who Amanda is! and you really know how to make angst really get to someone! ;-) Ouch! I can just see Trip's mouth hang open as Amanda confirms their 'date' just after T'Pol asks him to see the same movie...though to be fair to Trip, he is trying to move on. I wonder if the movie is 'Alien'. ;-) |
| Lee Goshabyn 2004-11-08 ch 4, | abuseHurry with the next chapter, it's hard to wait. |
| Lee Goshabyn 2004-11-08 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter. I hope I don't have to wait long for the next chapter. |
| JennaTripped 2004-11-07 ch 4, | abuseThis is SUCH a great story. Please keep up the awesome work! I loved how Trip was still deferring to Koss. It was so sad but great at the same time. I liked how he lost it and then realized how that would look and apologized. |